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Date Posted: 05:36:25 05/25/04 Tue
Author: KT
Subject: 填詞新手 ( 原曲:佛洛依德愛上林夕 )

筆者:先前以歌手角度去寫了一首作品
這次試一試以詞人角度來寫

學無止境 + 終生學習
填詞...真的不易...-.-

by:QuIn66

mms://www.greencoffee.com.hk/greensong/s1000428_10002423.mp3

 【填詞新手】

 新唱:QuIn66
 作曲:梁翹柏
 作詞:靜氣流
 編曲:梁翹柏

 執句子 執錯字 執這句執那句 描述故事
 仍然難合意 想不到合適單字
 沒法用句子 將深刻意義 譜進樂曲 簡單展示

 新構思 卻發覺很難配字
 只可看書看報 來尋覓有關漢字
 猶如胡亂試 找一個核心生字
 若錯用句式 便歪曲意義 所以務必 小心揀字

 *寫不好要盡力 寫得好更落力
  每次一聽見新曲 都很想試試用字能力
  加一點意會力 加一些創造力
  我信我會有一天 終歸可以憑漂亮戰績 贏得賞識

 Ba...Ba...Ba...

 一隻歌 要押韻方能配合
 可惜有些韻腳 仍然是那麼缺乏
 難填如特訓 寫一句用足七日
 但我亦覺得 付出的努力 都算值得

 不須花巧去用字 不必想法特異
 要記得配搭曲風 整體感覺暢順便成事
 加多點慣用字 減少些錯別字
 要作得貼切主旨 不應堆砌來配合意思

 Repeat *

 想上位 請努力

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