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Date Posted: 16:18:34 09/01/02 Sun
Author: Shadow
Subject: Equine/human>>> still needs feline/canine jessers?
In reply to: darkness shall never fall 's message, "Liana" on 19:37:07 08/31/02 Sat

Olah, your post are good, but instead of telling that the character is wary, or disdainful try and use more body language. Like half halts and shies nervously instead of warily. Something like that.

Equine:
Moonwashed form is viewed as she slips from the shadow grasp. Lithe torso flexed as half halt, pistons defying their set course. Nares flare wide, unaccustomed to the barrage of equine scents that flooded her sense. This, crowd, overwhelmed her sense. Orbs flicker warily, taking in all that there is to. Slight confusion befuddled the crania of the pearled beaut. All too sudden, the safety and the comfort of her shadow was torn away. Forsaken for the bright and crowded world called day. Hesitant stride forced to gain strength, as iron will of the iron clad regain composure. Diamonds commence percussion of her approach while tendrils flew in rebellious ascent from slender crest. Daring strand fell across alert orb, obstructing what may be a very important view. Lobes cast avidly, all escape routes open as the moon child stepped into the light.

Human:Truck of purest blue slid ease the ease of a mechanical brute into the parking lot, effortlessly terminating forwards thrust. Twisted agonized cry wrought from metal aperture as opening widened. Twin peds emerge, one ebony covered appendage followed by the other. Lithe limbs followed course, plain blue jeans held no bar to stunning natural allure. Tall lean figure accented in silhouette of midday blaze. Darkened lenses obscure startling force held in aqua gaze as soundless questions fill her thoughts. Absent removal of deepen chestnut tresses, lit afire on select strands array of blaze and somber. Arch above rob lifted higher yet, disdain cloaked carefully as the drab parking lot was surveyed once more. Soft shake of crania, causing mane to flare once more with the sun�s fire, as she slipped through the aperture. Out of the sun and into the florescent lighting.

Thats the basic idea, try and meld the more direct statements into others, so it looks more describing then telling.Really sorry but I'll do the lupine post when i get back from my grandmas unless Jessers does it.You can go start to play on the lupine/equine boards.

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