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Date Posted: 13:32:10 05/11/01 Fri
Author: Rafaél
Subject: Re: Jeana In A Bottle
In reply to: s.p. wells 's message, "Jeana In A Bottle" on 03:00:33 05/11/01 Fri

I personally think "you do not enter" would be easier for
this reader to negotiate, as "dense" seems to get the brain
in gear for "to" to read "do" and when I read "to" it kind
of halted me in my tracks.

In dense of fear,
a family bottle,
some now, have bid
you to not enter,

Words I've said,
thousands or hundreds
lesson-learned life,
past nightmare(s)strifes. (possibly)
Thanks to the ALL
substaining love,
real & extended family.


Another great read Susanne, take or leave my humble
suggestions as you see fit lol

Hope to read you later
take care

Rafael

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