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Date Posted: 14:57:13 05/04/01 Fri
Author: Rafaél
Subject: Re: ---Shadow---
In reply to: Neverlia 's message, "---Shadow---" on 04:35:52 05/04/01 Fri

Another enjoyable piece, I especially enjoyed
stanza 3, and presume the closing word to be distress.

Other than the typo, there is not really much to crit
on this piece,
Capitals, starting the lines is usually an MS word
induced way of sarting lines, so I don't bother
commenting with reagrd to that, as I have posted my
own works straight out of "word" editing software with
the same result.


Thank you, for posting
I will get to reading your other posts before the day is done

Rafael

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