| Subject: review it |
Author:
Derek
|
[
Next Thread |
Previous Thread |
Next Message |
Previous Message
]
Date Posted: 12:34:33 10/09/02 Wed
In reply to:
Kyung-jin
's message, "Assignment 1 " on 02:30:12 10/09/02 Wed
I want you to go through your description, make sure that there are no spelling or grammar mistakes(that you can find) and then email it to me. I will put [ ] around the mistakes. There may seem like a lot of mistakes but don't be discouraged. Learn from your mistakes. :J)
>I will introduce my room.
>[my] room is the most small in the house[,] but there [are]
>so [many furnituers] and [somethings else] such as a bed,a
>desk(so long), a piano, a wardrobe(I`m not sure , in
>korean,Àå·Õ[wardrobe is right]), and so on. I like to sit on the bed,
>[becouse][,] there is a big window in front of []bed. So
>when I get up, I can see the blue (or [glay],rainy) sky
>through the window. Can you image it? It`s a very
>interesting event[,] [of] [coures] sometimes it is so cold
>in winter[.And] I have a small bathroom in my room, but
>there are so many books, [becouse] my room is so small I
>can`t get [a] any bookshelf in my room.
>So in my bathroom, I sometimes read a book. ^^;; I
>like this place except [some] smell. How about my room?
>Do you like it? Anyway, I like my small room.
[
Next Thread |
Previous Thread |
Next Message |
Previous Message
]
| |
Feedback: 
