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Subject: correction


Author:
Derek
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Date Posted: 00:12:47 10/13/02 Sun
In reply to: ji-hyun 's message, "Assignment 1(I try..)" on 14:52:59 10/12/02 Sat

Before I correct your work I would like you to try and fix your own mistakes. I will put [] around the mistakes. After you try to fix your mistakes then email it to me. ^^
[] around nothing means that you are missing something.

>Well...
>I [] describe my room to you. Open the door, and [] can
>touch a soft and downy bed. It is covered [] [] pink quilt
>and [put] dolls. [] Dolls [are presented] my friends [in] my
>birthday.
>[] The opposite side of the bed is my desk. On the desk
>[take] computer. At the right side, there is a book
>shelf. I like books. [Best] my favorite book is Sherlock
>Holmes. It is written by Conan Doyle. He is very
>famous, and [had] published in a serial form. I read The
>Hound of the Baskervilles [in] very deep impreesion.
>Sherlock Holmes' personality is clear-hearted and
>famous secret investigation. If you read his books,
>you will like them.
>Under [side of] desk, there is [audio]. I like music.
>Especially I like pop and rnb [as] backstreet boys,
>britney speers, and esther. Listen to [there] music.
>Isn't it good?
>There are movie pictures on the wall.
>Please correct[ion]..!!

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