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Subject: Heartbreak


Author:
kkoala
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Date Posted: 13:02:42 10/13/02 Sun

My heart it lies broken, tortured and torn
Shattered by words spoken over the phone
They were so calmly spoken so matter of fact
It seems our engagement was just a big act

To tell me so coldly that we were through
Was a very hurtful and cruel thing to do
With no explanation of what I’d done
Never a chance to right what was wrong

All I could do was feel hurt and cry
And hope in the morning I’d find it a lie
Alas morning came and my torment too
The words cruelly spoken were so very true

She’s brushed me aside like a bit of dust
To languish in sorrow for all that I’d lost
I can’t lose these feelings for the girl I love
I’ll just have to beat them and stay up above

Just like the Phoenix from Flames the I will rise
I’ll continue as always getting on with my life
By making myself and other people laugh
They all will think, that just maybe I'm daft

©Alan G.T. Mason 8 Oct 2002

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[> Subject: Re: Heartbreak


Author:
Jemmones
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Date Posted: 22:22:56 10/13/02 Sun

I empathise with this one ... only difference is that I was told "face to face" and not on the telephone. It says it all with good flow and without the "why me" rejection label. HADDAWAY PHEONIX!!!(J)

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[> Subject: Re: Heartbreak


Author:
Oksana Lutsenko
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Date Posted: 04:42:28 10/14/02 Mon



>Just like the Phoenix from Flames the I will rise
>I’ll continue as always getting on with my life
>By making myself and other people laugh
>They all will think, that just maybe I'm daft
>
>©Alan G.T. Mason 8 Oct 2002

Loved it all, as usual, but what the heck does "daft" mean? I really do feel for you right now, you'd be surprised Koala. Thanks for posting stuff here, you enlighten stuff for all of us, I'm sure. Thanks for doing this whole site, it's great!

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[> Subject: Re: Heartbreak


Author:
kkoala
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Date Posted: 04:50:21 10/14/02 Mon

Hi Oksana.......daft means silly, stupid, acting the fool, Being the Court Jester if you will. Thanks again for kind words they really are an inspiration.

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[> Subject: Re: Heartbreak


Author:
KKoala
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Date Posted: 12:06:04 10/16/02 Wed

Thanks Jemmones for words. Yea it's hard and believe it or not it happens all to often. Thanks for words much appreciated (kk)

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[> Subject: Re: Heartbreak


Author:
Gloria
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Date Posted: 01:37:05 10/20/02 Sun

This poem was well written. I know the feelings you have inside. I have also been there myself but you will do ok. I have faith in you. Keep your chin up.

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