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Subject: Timeless Spirit


Author:
kkoala
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Date Posted: 17:23:14 10/12/02 Sat

He sits upon his horse, so proud
All around his kin and crowd
The merriment these next few hours
Would be their last for doom it towers

They all must ride and face a foe
And some will kill standing toe to toe
Outnumbered many time to one
The knife against the soldiers gun

They ride and shot a battle cry
For know they all they soon must die
The bullet rip, the arrows fly
Yet still the Native has to try

The White Man came to this their land
Tried stealing it by sleight of hand
The Native chiefs got wise and vowed
To go to war and not be cowed

He sits upon his horse, so proud
All around the land is ploughed
No remnants left of battle done
He vanishes slowly, now he’s gone.

© Alan G.T. Mason 12 Oct 2002-10-12

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[> Subject: Re: Timeless Spirit


Author:
Jemmones
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Date Posted: 17:28:11 10/12/02 Sat

Really enjoyed this ... especially the end. More please. J

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Author:
Oksana
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Date Posted: 17:39:45 10/12/02 Sat

>Really enjoyed this ... especially the end. More
>please. J

I don't really get how to use this thing yet, but I will eventually.... This poem is wonderful, and the title even more so. I enjoyed it very much; it was good to hear an Englishman stand up for the right of the Indians. What a paradox we live in! Great poem, Koala, thanks for tellin' me about this site...
~Oksana

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[> [> Subject: Re: Timeless Spirit


Author:
kkoala
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Date Posted: 05:23:43 10/13/02 Sun

Thanks for comments, very good of you, much appreciated. kk

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[> [> Subject: Re: Timeless Spirit


Author:
KKoala
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Date Posted: 12:25:19 10/16/02 Wed

Thank you J you critique is much appreciated. (kk)

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