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Date Posted: 13:52:24 08/27/04 Fri
Author: Raphaela
Author Host/IP: dsl-80-43-94-105.access.uk.tiscali.com / 80.43.94.105
Subject: Re: Beachcomber
In reply to: Gray Squirrel 's message, "Beachcomber" on 01:32:01 08/27/04 Fri

I think this is one where it means more to the writer than the reader. I like the use of tight lines but, without being able to read the meaning between the lines, I feel I need more description or expression.

R

>Beachcomber
>
>Plastic moments,
>Shifted, spent,
>A discarded container,
>A pile of trash.
>
>When you said
>You "couldn't"
>I already knew
>The answer.
>When you said
>You "loved me,"
>I didn't know.
>
>When you said anything...
>
>The tide, the flow,
>Where sand fills
>The holes,
>Where we once
>Created glass.
>
>There are other people,
>Yes...
>They find "agates," and
>Laugh.
>
>-Gray Squirrel

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