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Date Posted: 09:54:59 01/10/05 Mon
Author: Raphaela
Author Host/IP: dsl-80-46-168-164.access.uk.tiscali.com / 80.46.168.164
Subject: Re: THE SONG YOUR BODY MAKES
In reply to: Zig Zag 's message, "THE SONG YOUR BODY MAKES" on 21:10:00 01/06/05 Thu

This is beautifully written and has a lyrical quality to the poem. I love the musical imagery. She is a very lucky lady.

>Theres a melody floating in my head
>A sight a sound thats all it takes
>I think of you softly sleeping in your bed
>Its not a dream, this is the song your body makes
>
>This is the song your body makes to me
>A serenade, an aria of our love
>Its something i want the whole world to see
>You are like an angel sent to me from above
>
>Your music is a cauldron of emotion
>With a rhythmic beat that matches your heart
>One moment a gentle ballad, the next a rousing
>composition
>The sound fulfills and comforts me when we are apart
>
>Your body is a full symphonic orchestra
>It is as majestic and beautiful as the Great Lakes
>The tempo is pulsing and fast, yet light as a feather
>Because my darling this is the song your body makes
>
>You are all the music in the world
>I hear your soft lilting lullaby as i sleep
>Dreams fade with the morning light as the music starts
>to build
>Memories of moonlight passion eternally ours to keep
>
>Our lips touch softly as a violin plays
>My heart picks up the beat of yours and starts to race
>Everlasting and true love we pledge for all of our days
>Slate blue eyes return my gaze as my lips kiss your
>face
>
>We are in perfect harmony as we make love
>Tender carsses as a guitar strums
>Falling deeper, deeper as we fit together like a glove
>The climax of our desire to the crash of the drums
>
>Two lovers passion rising as the music reaches a
>crescendo
>Minds and bodies merging eternally forever to give,
>not take
>In the aftermath of the moment there is something we
>both know
>One love, true love, its the song your body makes.

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