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Date Posted: 22:14:15 04/25/05 Mon
Author: Rafaél
Author Host/IP: ppp-0-42.manc-b-1.access.uk.tiscali.com / 80.40.36.42
Subject: Re: Frühling Erwachen
In reply to: Raphaela 's message, "Frühling Erwachen" on 16:56:36 04/23/05 Sat

Hi Raphaela,

I hope all is well with you and yours. I like the imagery you have used here. Also the last stanza is a very fitting closure to the piece. Just a thought about the use of past tense. I think, present lifts it a little more. Just an observation. As it has the feel of present in the first line continuing until the last word of line two. Also in a few other areas. Maybe just the way I am reading.

Thanks for the read

Rafael

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