Re: The Solidarity -- Unicorn

[ Show ]

Support VoyForums

[ Shrink ]

VoyForums Announcement: Programming and providing support for this service has been a labor of love since 1997. We are one of the few services online who values our users' privacy, and have never sold your information. We have even fought hard to defend your privacy in legal cases; however, we've done it with almost no financial support -- paying out of pocket to continue providing the service. Due to the issues imposed on us by advertisers, we also stopped hosting most ads on the forums many years ago. We hope you appreciate our efforts.

Show your support by donating any amount. (Note: We are still technically a for-profit company, so your contribution is not tax-deductible.) PayPal Acct: Feedback:

Donate to VoyForums (PayPal):

[ Login ] [ Contact Forum Admin ] [ Main index ] [ Post a new message ] [ Search | Check update time | Archives: 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10 ]

[ Next Thread | Previous Thread | Next Message | Previous Message ]

Date Posted: 15:12:38 08/07/05 Sun
Author: Raphaela
Author Host/IP: dsl-80-45-197-187.access.as9105.com / 80.45.197.187
Subject: Re: The Solidarity
In reply to: AGS 's message, "The Solidarity" on 20:16:49 08/04/05 Thu

Good to read you again Al, your poetry has its own distinctive style and a dreamlike quality.

Must catch up soon.

R

>Tear me, ever; O' Lady, so
>gently, among fevered and softened heights
>
>wondering
>tethered
>
>this weave bears
>crisp arrogant chills, sift
>harsh airs
>so
>intrinsically, by wet streams of
>music
>
>played, that shall
>
>field
>always, the grandest
>sparks, loose
>upon fragile lingering sights
>of the fallen
>waters
>
>clear it makes none
>of its distinguishing marks;
>the blaring of so
>far a range
>
>In endless succession the heighten'd mountains do
>looms - offer tranquilities
>in her
>weaves
>(alas) too
>by the endless circumference of
>the furthest seen valley
>a churn lit
>as bright
>as a tossed sun -
>light
>
>perceptions of
>the scattering of
>waves; frugal, larks
>in soft flying
>as
>a
>winds by
>salted seashore
>grown, ever in its diced --
>
>majestic,
>
>winds of flight
>
>and winds, in the highlands to be
>always
>
>sheered
>respected, hear'd, readily dismissed
>
>a bliss of circumference
>wild
>hidden
>
>meaningless; but
>to
>you
>
>like slim fallen wax-
>es of burnt sifted candles:
>
>deceived ever;
>that line the row
>of drifted raw spirals of ranges, of
>
>heighted mountains:
>
>fire traced, that will mention
>her own sight of trances
>
>An elegance in touch; the skill belonged
>a tongue without speech
>floated
>the traces of harbors by groves
>meandering through high cliffs
>in wondering, the back
>of the winding sun
>
>forefront, flat, skies, disguise
>pocked ever
>as alleys or cobs -
>
>a tender bee is watching hears
>
>rudiments; the hearts fears; so beside
>another, set wandering eyes
>and a bees song
>
>to;
>
>climb heavens skies
>
>That must -
>
>know no clouded sight
>weave, save
>structure by the lying fern
>
>a head, an earn
>and colored, dabbed
>away; it must
>turn
>
>Hence, the wonder
>of another
>day, in
>
>wandering song
>
>Slims the travails line
>captured inside,
>
>the halls glow, so often yellow
>as fishes, winded starken caves
>of a sea
>
>bent on keeping;
>the quaint deal they have made
>and of course, the walls don't listen
>nor
>rocks inside -
>
>that weaves too
>of a seas striation
>
>Who dwells, so much near
>furlongs, roads, maps
>
>atlas
>
>Her sleek traps now by mud's
>relief's aching,
>
>and the moon soft overhead,
>to cast an oft bewildered shadow
>
>The wires her dread
>never told
>
>nor any; just
>the winds of sky's
>
>environment gone; as she
>
>has taken the wind
>that has gone alone
>with her

[ Next Thread | Previous Thread | Next Message | Previous Message ]