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Date Posted: 13:49:49 10/10/05 Mon
Author: Raphaela
Author Host/IP: 88-110-209-86.dynamic.dsl.as9105.com / 88.110.209.86
Subject: Re: the actor
In reply to: arthur 's message, "the actor" on 03:32:48 10/10/05 Mon

Welcome to Unicorn Arthur - hope to see more of your work here.

I liked the strength of this poem, it seemed to say so much more than the words on the page. Good use of rhythm and rhyme to help the words flow from beginning to end.


Raphaela


>the actor
>
>I smile and I walk
>I smile and I talk
>Look!what do you see?
>An actor,it isn't me
>
>See how clever I am
>A performing marionette
>Acting out my play
>The actors false display
>
>In the depth of the night
>When i pray for the light
>And my sins come howling home
>I am myself:Broken and alone
>
>arthur

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