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Date Posted: 08:03:45 07/15/02 Mon
Author: sp99
Author Host/IP: pool-63.53.132.158.nwrk.grid.net / 63.53.132.158
Subject: Re: ~Once In '99 ~ [strong adult]
In reply to: Gemini 's message, "Re: ~Once In '99 ~ [strong adult]" on 04:28:51 07/15/02 Mon

Hi Gem, thanks, I did do a rewrite based on Raphaela's
comment, saved it or so I thought and cannot find it
this morning which does upset me. However, I'm not upset at what Al said but perhaps I am a tad prickly about that one
line and your right, the piece is close to me. However,
I was not offended by what Al said and appreciate your
comments as well, thank you!!!

>Hi Susanne,
>I think maybe the subject matter within this piece is
>too close for you to have it critiqued.
>What Al says is valid I think, that you use a language
>that is not the norm. I don't think he was saying get
>rid of that line just that it wasn't how one would
>normally say it, or with the other word you said you
>had changed it for.
>But as Al says who knows your style maybe the rave of
>the future.
>Regards.
>Gem.

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