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Date Posted: 22:22:08 07/16/02 Tue
Author: sp99
Author Host/IP: pool-63.53.97.245.nwrk.grid.net / 63.53.97.245
Subject: Re: Misery
In reply to: CJ 's message, "Misery" on 11:19:37 07/15/02 Mon

I very much like the rhythm
and rhyme in this poem,
well done CJ!!! *grin*,
so many lines I liked, be
almost like putting the whole
of your poem again to illustrate!!!
SuSanne

>Misery

>It's a shame every time
>We get together
>It's a shame it causes
>Stormy weather
>Holding up on choices
>Hesitation in our voices
>Stumbling in the wake
>Of intimidation
>
>It's so sad every day
>Is mass confusion
>It's too bad our need
>Is self-delusion
>Standing in the shade
>See the vision fade
>Wondering how to change
>The situation
>
>There's a chance we'll never
>Find an answer
>There's a chance the pain
>Will spread like cancer
>Misery you can't hide
>You waste away inside
>Not knowing if you'll
>Ever come to terms
>
>It's a shame every time
>We chance to meet
>It's a shame we stress
>To self defeat
>Dwelling on the past
>Why it didn't last
>Unwilling to give in
>To our concerns
>
>� Coastaljoe

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Re: Misery -- Raphaela, 14:06:43 07/20/02 Sat