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Date Posted: 14:27:02 07/20/02 Sat
Author: Raphaela
Author Host/IP: webcacheM05b.cache.pol.co.uk / 195.92.194.15
Subject: Re: Sadness
In reply to: SandDollar 's message, "Sadness" on 19:33:44 07/17/02 Wed

Beautifully written and the format of the last stanza works particularly well here.

'Salt' an element of tears also represents the corrosive element in relationships - used by D H Lawrence a lot, so could also be symbolic in other ways.

Much enjoyed - although a sad subject - it is one we can identify with and you have expressed it perfectly.

Raphaela





>Sadness
>is defined
>
>by the salt
>concentration
>On your
>
>soothing lips
>
>They bathe
>in dreams
>
>trailing
>down
>my cheek,
>
>one drop
>at
>a
>time
>
>©SandDollar; 2002

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