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Date Posted: 16:09:10 07/20/02 Sat
Author: icyheart
Author Host/IP: wv-bkly-ubr-b-024-159-122-106.charterwv.net / 24.159.122.106
Subject: Re: Sealed
In reply to: Raphaela 's message, "Re: Sealed" on 14:56:48 07/20/02 Sat

Raphaela...thank you. I do honestly enjoy writing dark, maybe a little too much. As for the challenge. It was a ship sailing off into the sunset. Take care sweet lady
icy

>Ah writing on the darkside - I see this was for one of
>the Meadow's challenges - what was the challenge? I
>missed that one.
>
>You need an extra 'o' on the 'to' on the penultimate
>stanza.
>
>Full of pessimism and gloom, particularly when one
>cannot pray.
>
>Raphaela
>
>
>
>>As I watch the setting sun
>>Slowly remove color and light
>>Throwing me into a dark misty night
>>
>>Upon the evening tide I set them free
>>All my dreams and hopes
>>As my life takes a final downward slope
>>
>>Knowing death is knocking at the door
>>Not knowing from where it will come
>>My mind and body just feel numb
>>
>>As I move from shadow to shadow
>>With all happiness erased or thrown away
>>I feel it is to late even to pray
>>
>>I have quit making any plans of a future
>>For as my days are filled with gloom
>>My future is filled with doom
>>
>>Icyheart
>>07/19/02

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Re: Sealed -- Raphaela, 23:16:08 07/20/02 Sat