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Date Posted: 23:44:57 07/20/02 Sat
Author: SuSanne &*_*&
Author Host/IP: pool-63.53.97.111.nwrk.grid.net / 63.53.97.111
Subject: Comes Blindness - final, final version
In reply to: SuSanne 's message, "I agreeFINAL VERSION - Comes Blindness" on 15:30:58 07/20/02 Sat

>>I found this very meaningful and sincere.
>>I think the last stanza may benefit from a slight
>>rewrite
>>Good work though.
>>>Raphaela

I so agreed with you about the last stanza AND then
missed a slight correction in the next to last,
now corrected so this is the final, FINAL version.
Thanks Raphaela again for valued imput although I
had rewritten before I read your words, your words
helped me with the final, FINAL version and it is
nice to know I was on the right track. *smile* SP

COMES BLINDNESS


Lord I am accepting, yet scared
As my vision slowly fades
Turning off colours of life,
Painting my world gray.

Words I have delighted in
Are now running from view
From a magnifying glass prism
Even though there is nothing, I can sue.

So my crankiness expounds
Daily fighting the fear
As I pray dear Lord
You hold me near and dear.

Also I pray others will see
Not to take anything for granted
That so includes me
Of fading sight much wanted.

But sadly soon may be gone
Regardless of throughout my life
Have really never done others wrong
In this life ever drawing to a close
With visions .. of blindness adding strife.


© SuSanne &*_*&

20.7.02~smb.powell
All rights reserved
RainbowSam11@hotmail.com

Dedicated for my friend H.K.



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