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Date Posted: 00:01:37 07/21/02 Sun
Author: sp99
Author Host/IP: pool-63.53.97.111.nwrk.grid.net / 63.53.97.111
Subject: Re: The Rose
In reply to: IcyHeart 's message, "The Rose" on 16:44:48 07/20/02 Sat

This is superb writing IcyBro!!!
And I love this peek of humour
from between the petals:
>All roses are beautiful as is the woman
>With one slight difference
>A rose can be a thorn in the hand
>The woman a thorn in the side

>But now with the pun being said"
....although
I might suggest changing 'the' to 'that' which
does not take away from the super work you show us here!!!
Thank you!!! sisSUS.

>The Rose

>It is said that God created all things
>With this I have no argument
>My favorite two things in creation
>Are the rose and the woman

>I think God knew what he was doing
>When the creation took place
>Both the rose and the woman
>Can put a smile on this old mans face

>All roses are beautiful as is the woman
>With one slight difference
>A rose can be a thorn in the hand
>The woman a thorn in the side

>But now with the pun being said
>Lets get down to the real similarities
>Any one that knows me
>Knows what a rose means to me

>A rose is like a woman
>Some are soft and kind
>Easy to look at
>Easy to love

>Now a rose should be nurtured
>Sweetly talked to and gently touched
>Cherished and loved
>For it was made by God above

>To me a rose is like a rainbow
>It is beautiful anytime it is seen
>God gave us the rose to be
>Held in the hands with love

>The rose and the woman
>To me are to be treated equally
>For God took the time to create both
>Should a person not take the time

>To stop and smell the rose
>And treat it with the respect due
>So if someone sends you a rose
>It could be they think the world of you

>© Icyheart
>07/20/02

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  • Re: The Rose -- Raphaela, 12:50:14 07/21/02 Sun
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