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Date Posted: 22:31:32 07/22/02 Mon
Author: sp99
Author Host/IP: pool-63.53.145.171.nwrk.grid.net / 63.53.145.171
Subject: P.S.
In reply to: sp99 's message, "Re: Did She Realize" on 22:26:36 07/22/02 Mon

Oh yes Al, you never answered me if I may keep
a full-credited copy of your "Arrival"....*smile*. SP

>Without any disrespect for this board's knowledgeable
>English Teacher, bet your not surprised I loved
>>'frills you thought' except I would have prefer 'your'
>instead of 'you'...*grin*. However I totally agree with
>her about the last stanza, a super read Al, thanks!!!
>
>SuSanne
>
>>very romantic and I particularly liked the last stanza
>>
>>'Bring it near
>>stop at his knee
>>then realize
>>he's come
>>this near
>>and spoke
>>and only
>>to me'
>>
>>It gave me an image of 19th century literature and
>>swooning maidens.
>>
>>I stumbled over this line
>>
>>'frills you thought'
>>
>>Is it a typo or what you intended?
>>
>>You can clarify when we next chat as tiredness is
>>probably confusing my clarity of thought.
>>
>>R
>>
>>
>>
>>
>>
>>
>>
>>
>>>The silken breeze tickles you
>>>says amore in so many languages
>>>frills you thought
>>>that
>>>winked
>>>in your eyes
>>>as you saw the trees
>>>saw the skies
>>>
>>>A moon you saw
>>>said it too
>>>like a blow horn
>>>aimed so directly
>>>at you
>>>
>>>And your heart once again
>>>took its bow
>>>to think
>>>oh where is he
>>>and
>>>is he now
>>>
>>>For my arms
>>>long
>>>to fetch the pail
>>>fill it high
>>>in my loves
>>>strong gale
>>>
>>>Bring it near
>>>stop at his knee
>>>then realize
>>>he's come
>>>this near
>>>and spoke
>>>and only
>>>to me

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Re: P.S. -- AAAAGGGSSS, 23:48:56 07/22/02 Mon