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Date Posted: 10:19:16 07/23/02 Tue
Author: Raphaela
Author Host/IP: webcacheM08b.cache.pol.co.uk / 195.92.194.18
Subject: Re: Tulip Shelter
In reply to: AAAAGGGSSS 's message, "Tulip Shelter" on 15:18:53 07/21/02 Sun

I adore the way your language and imagery meander, creating such visual images for the reader and what a wonderful dreamy quality to the tone. Reminds me of the modernist writing - everywhere and nowhere.

Raphaela


>You feel
>like Jell-O
>
>too often,
>sheered elastic
>with fountains
>
>always that
>seep
>drip
>and spill upon me
>
>Provide the elegance
>of spring
>
>with its rising
>flowers
>
>heads
>of tulips
>and dandelion
>that tear
>the fragrance
>around
>
>Miniscule perfume bottles
>of wind
>and puff
>
>that zap the air
>of their ordinariness'
>
>Give me shelter
>from the wind
>
>an ark
>as Noah's
>floating with you
>
>tall boats
>at the rear
>
>your symphony
>always
>
>louder and louder
>
>that rescues me
>
>from the drain
>I follow
>after

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