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Date Posted: 08:24:45 07/11/01 Wed
Author: Belinda Bell
Subject: Re: Put To Good Use. Thanks for Posting!
In reply to: Angelo S. 's message, "Put To Good Use." on 10:37:55 06/30/01 Sat

Very good concept.
I am wondering why not place your writing in prose form. It makes an easier read somehow.

I liked the premise.Also, I would add more personal detail to confirm what you just said.

Belinda

> On or about the time we turned sixteen, our body and
>mind became goods for the world. We either began,
>showing the right moves, walking the right walk or
>talking the right talk. In dollars and cents, in
>effort and pleasure an account was started, so we
>would be put to good use.
>
>Put To Good Use.
>
> In on going years of youth and beyond, our body and
>mind became cause for an effect. We either married,
>received more education or sold our soul to the
>company logo. In time, blood, sweat and tears were
>part of our daily bread. A day will arrive when this
>account, is paid and stamped-put to good use.
>
>Put To Good Use.
>
>PS: I wrote this after commenting about-the ways and
>means-of work in the USA-How like where I work-there
>are say 100 people working-yet-only one person gets
>rich-the owner-And we never stop and say or
>think-Somethings very wrong with this picture-indeed!

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