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Subject: <>candy is sweet, but revenge is sweeter<>


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Sweet Revenge
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Date Posted: 02:00:18 02/14/03 Fri

*stands looking down at the horses, dark coat gleaming in the sun, black hairs fighting the cold wind. emerald eyes gaze across the lands, ashen hooves shift the soft dirt* how predicatble these animals are. the mares walk down there and a few seconds later they are being charmed by a stallion and led to his herd! they act like we are dolls, simple dolls to be placed on a shelf and then shown off. *snorts* of course to be the best you must collect as many dolls as possible. only then are you king. even worse the stallions claim that is not their desire, that they were stunned by our beauty and only wish us to live peacefully with them at their home. home? what is a home? is it a cage where you are locked up, safe, but bored and restless? or is it love? *pain shoots through optics at the mention of the word* love? what is love? no on eknows the true answer. however i know neither love nor homes can be had when you are free. i am free. free to do as i wish, be as and who i wish! for i am free and i certainly have never been home, nor shall i be! *snorts and stomps hooves. eyes harden and become deep and cold, mane and tail no longer fighting the wind.*

((sorry for every one who posted to thi9s in the start, i had this huge problem. it's a really long story that i don't want to tell. if you still want me to join you can repost, or new ppl can post. w/e i dun't care. i'm really sorry!! i believe the 3 that posted were Trouble, Ocean Fire, and Stranger Magic.))

the coal mare's eyes ignited(sp?) with fire as the studs all surrounded her offering homes and willingness to fight for her. *stomps her foot and snorts loudly silencing them all.* is this a way to show me i am not a doll? for all of you to crowd around me all saying you want me? what is it you want! what makes me a desired doll? don't even try to tell me that is not your though for i can see it on your face, plain as day! *eyes seem to rage with the last words* what do you consider me as? i shall not be chained up nor shown off. how can you say you will fight for me if you do not even know who iam. no, you only say this to earn my love, to show how strong you are. Ha, it showed me naught except you are all weak and as simple minded as all other stallions i've known! *lowers head with ears laid back. glossy hooves remain motionless, telling them to leave for she had been here first, yet somewhere in her mind tugged a small thought telling her that should they leave it proves them more of a coward than the others. she could not go with any one who could not extinguish her fire. she had yet to find any who could, yet deep inside her heart she longed for love and a home. beeing free was great, but she had always heard love stories and tales of great homes. yet her mind overruled her heart warning her of trickery.*

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[> Subject: Night of Magic


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SM
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Date Posted: 05:23:03 02/14/03 Fri

smiles at the Mare*Hello.I still welcome you to my herd*H esays.he nuzzles her softly*Please learn to trust me or any stallion that claims you*he wisppears(SP?)
[> [> Subject: <>candy is sweet, but revenge is sweeter<>


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Sweet Revenge
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Date Posted: 08:04:46 02/14/03 Fri

~the dark mare continued her warning stance when suddenly one stallion approached her, offering a nuzzle. she backed away in a flash yet still the love and the warmth brushed her. starts to protest when a figure is seen in the corner of her emerald pools. she turns outraged another dared to take her. suddenly the mares harsh actions stop and she seems to have a luxerious stance, coat gleaming and orbs sparkeling. she walks around the stallions eyes the image of pure innocence. as you fall for her trap she suddenly rears up fores lashing in the air.~

What makes me think i should trust you? prove me wrong, because so far each one of you has proven me right.

~the coal mare drops to all fores suddenly and harshly emerald eyes gleaming with mistrust~

do not stand there and tell me how beautiful i am, for that will surely not win my heart. show me, do not tell. actions are stronger than words.

~the mare then drops her head looking at each stallion. her mind laughed while her heart sang. another had come and one had stayed. yet she did not want to be treated like a princess, that was not her style. she cared not if she was dirty or her love strong.~
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SM
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Date Posted: 09:23:48 02/14/03 Fri

he steps back*Yes I will show you*he says and waits for another
[> Subject: §±€±§Whispers of a Nameless Fear§±€±§


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Fear
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Date Posted: 05:41:56 02/14/03 Fri

§±€±§Shadowed steed hears the entrance of a new mare and looks over to see. He sees her standing, stomping, eyes filled with fire... the very thing he liked so much in mares-fiestyness and smarts, not willing to go with just any stallion, but the one she trusted. Whinney escapes vocals as steed moves t'ward she at three beat gait, midnight coat gleaming as strong muscles ripple 'neath it, darkened pools stay fixed 'pon she. Stop is made before she and elegant bow is performed, then mascu straightens self and looks into her eyes... those lovely eyes so filled with fire...§±€±§ I would be most honored, m'lady, if you would join me at my herd. You would have a large, beautiful home there, plenty of companionship, love and protection, for I protect my mares with my life and love them with all my heart. It is a forest on the edge of a beach, and there are caves to protect from the elements, and a few small open meadows in the forest. I will not force you and want you to go with only whom you'd be happiest, but I want you to know you can always find companionship, protection, love and a wonderfull home with me. §±€±§He smiles, orbs shining and dancing, hoping against hope that she would come with him, for she had captured his heart-no, not her beauty, not at all, but her spirit, fiesty, firey, smart, brave, bold, free... he felt so unworthy of her, like anything he could do for her would never be enough, but he hoped that she would accept his invatation and come with him, for doubtless he would love her with all his heart, and protect her with his life.§±€±§


§±€±§Do you hear the Whispers? The Whispers dreaded most of all... the Whispers of a Nameless Fear§±€±§

[> [> Subject: Night of Magic


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Date Posted: 09:31:29 02/14/03 Fri

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His anger was not to be tested here, for when it did flare up it was unstopable.He snorted angerly at the mare*come with me* he says and pushes her towards his herd
[> [> [> Subject: <>candy is sweet, but revenge is sweeter<>


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Sweet Revenge
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Date Posted: 10:34:47 02/14/03 Fri

~the mare's eyes gleam as she is pushed by the stallion. she alsmost seems to smile when she leaps sideways from the stallion~

a fight is what you want? i have plently of strength!

~the coal black maresteps runs the oppsite direction of the stud, passing by him. as she runs past she kicks her heels up, their mark aimed for a hit.~
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Date Posted: 14:21:00 02/14/03 Fri

stallon moves elagently to the side.He spins and aims at he flank
[> [> [> [> [> Subject: <>candy is sweet, but revenge is sweeter<>


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Sweet Revenge
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Date Posted: 15:41:46 02/14/03 Fri

~the black mare tries to side step, but squeals as one hoof scraps accross her flank. she stands still watching the blood slowly drip from the fresh cut. with fury she turns and runs straight at the stallion teeth bared, ready to bite his flank. however the mare's speed is slightly hindered by the wound on her flank~
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Date Posted: 05:07:14 02/15/03 Sat

he streches out his neck and aims at her sholders.the as she comes closer he gets bitten on his sholder*!*I like your spirit*!*he says to her
[> [> [> [> [> [> [> Subject: ącandy is sweet, but revenge is sweeterą


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Sweet Revenge
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Date Posted: 10:58:15 02/15/03 Sat

~the mare backs away from the stallion, standing still slightly tired from the battle. she looks hard at the stallion who acted like this was all a game.~

that's nice that you like my spirit, pity you won't have me to show off.

~the mare snorts and continues to stand, waiting to see if he continues the fight.~
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Date Posted: 15:00:24 02/15/03 Sat

*!*Snorts and stops to.he stares hard at her.He turns and leaves slightly mad but cooled down*!*Catch you later*!*he calls and with that dissapears
[> [> [> [> [> [> [> [> Subject: .:.Trouble On Its Way.:.


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Date Posted: 15:11:09 02/15/03 Sat

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~the mare
.:.He watched him leave and turned to her.:. Good job. He looked scared of you, or was that just me? .:.
[> [> [> [> [> [> [> [> [> Subject: .:.Trouble On Its Way.:. ^^read this one^^


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Trouble
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Date Posted: 15:28:24 02/15/03 Sat

((other one was screwed up))

.:.He watched him leave and turned to her.:. Good job. He looked scared of you, or was that just me? .:.He smiled and looked back to the departing stallion.:.

[> Subject: /\shuffle the deck/\


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Date Posted: 08:00:25 02/14/03 Fri

The paint stallion swiftly trots up to her, and he makes a stop in front of her, bowing. Hello m'lady! I'm Ace of Spades, but please call me Ace. If you like, you can come and join my harem if you want. It is a very beautiful place, I will ussure(sp?) you. He digs his hoof into the ground, waiting for a reply.
[> [> Subject: <>candy is sweet, but revenge is sweeter<>


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Sweet Revenge
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Date Posted: 09:07:55 02/14/03 Fri

~the dark mare hears yet more hoofbeats and whirls around to see a newcomer, treating her just as she hated~

m'lady? is that supposed to impress me? does it make me think you shall treat me like royalty? *snorts* why is your herd better than these other stallions? how is a herd better than freedom?!

~the mare's emerald orbs once again flare up, angered that the steed came out of no where, beckoning her to follow him. her nostrils flare as a snort is realeased, her mind angered that the stallion knew nothing of her, yet he wants her~
[> [> [> Subject: <>candy is sweet, but revenge is sweeter<>


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Sweet Revenge
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Date Posted: 10:40:26 02/14/03 Fri

~the mare's eyes gleam as she is pushed by the stallion. she alsmost seems to smile when she leaps sideways from the stallion~

a fight is what you want? i have plently of strength!

~the coal black mare steps runs the oppsite direction of the stud, passing by him. as she runs past she kicks her heels up, their mark aimed for a hit.~

((i posted again because i keep posting in the middle not the end. then it's very confusing..))
[> [> [> [> Subject: ącandy is sweet, but revenge is sweeterą


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Sweet Revenge
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Date Posted: 19:00:00 02/14/03 Fri

test
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Ace
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Date Posted: 03:33:14 02/15/03 Sat

The stallion rears.Whoa there! I didn't ask for a fight. He steps back as she kicks, and misses. Look, if you don't want me here, then just tell me. Remeber what you said in your first post? 'New horses can come and claim her also.' Youdon't have to be so mean about it. He snorts, disgusted with this mare.
[> [> [> [> [> Subject: (huh, no i'm not fightinh you. i'm fighting SM he tried to push me to his tt)


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Sweet Revenge
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Date Posted: 08:19:12 02/15/03 Sat

[> [> [> [> [> [> Subject: .:.Trouble On Its Way.:.


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Date Posted: 11:47:59 02/15/03 Sat

((sorry if it's too late. i was in the old post))

.:.He saw a fight and was rather curious to what started it. He trotted over and watched for a few moments then stepped up.:. Excuse me for interuping, but Strange Magic, why the hell are you fighting her? If she doesn't want to go to your herd then she doesn't want to go to your herd.:.He was going to add I wouldn't blame her but decided not to.:.

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Sweet Revenge
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Date Posted: 15:44:12 02/15/03 Sat

~the black mare nods her head at the stallion's departure, happy to be rid of him.~

if you can not tame the fire, get out of the heat! *tuns to the other stallions* now, i believe i was asking you to tell me why i should go to your land.

~the mare stands before all the steeds, left hind slightly raised due to the gash accross it. her emerald eyes seemed emotionless as she spoke to them, her body shaking from the battle.~
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Date Posted: 05:01:17 02/16/03 Sun

((Oh, sry. It seemed like you where fighting me. Sry 'bout that. :) ))

The paint stallion smiles. Well m'lady, I would protect you until the day...I...DIE! I give loving care to all my mares that need my help. He smiles, proud of when he said, I will protect you till the day...I...DIE! Because he would.
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Trouble
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Date Posted: 07:04:14 02/16/03 Sun

.:.He did not like this, 'winning' a mare over why she should come with him. Ace's answer was quite dramatic and he couldn't help but think, "You made your point." He snorted and pawed the ground, staying silent.:.
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Sweet Revenge
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Date Posted: 15:37:36 02/16/03 Sun

~the mare snorts at the paint's answer.~

you don't even know me so why would you protect me. or are you protecting your collection?

~dark mare turns to the one dubbed Trouble and paws her hoof back at him.~

why should you win me over? because only if i learn to trust you will i come, and only if you teach me trust, will i learn to trust. if you just want to take me to your home with out my consent then i can tell right now i'm not coming with you. *green orbs search among the stallions hoping to find the answer to her two questions of love and home*.
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Trouble
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Date Posted: 17:52:39 02/16/03 Sun

.:.Excuse me, but I never said I wanted to 'win you over'.:.He gave her a look, trying to remember if he had indeed said that, but no memory came.:. Trust is what you look for? .:.He nodded his head thoughtfully.:. Alright then. But I warn you, I can't say much, for I don't know you whatsoever. Then why have I come up to you? I saw you fighting the son-of-a-bitch and was curious about it. Anyway, while I'm here I might as well get involved.:.He stepped closer to her, a smile on his face.:. Trust... that's a strong word. Building a bond of trust is strong as well. What would you like to know? What the forest where my herd is located is like? Or how the mares in my herd are... umm... .:.He didn't know what word to say. Care... no... .:.er... 'treat' for the lack of a better word. Or even what I'm like, for I don't believe I've even intrudced myself.:.
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Sweet Revenge
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Date Posted: 19:13:26 02/16/03 Sun

~the mare starts to say he had said that, but decides otherwise. her heart was leaning towards this stud, he had commen sense and didn't act like most stallions. she turns her head slightly to one side her emerald pools thoughtfully looking at him. her mind warned her to get to know him better, but for once her heart chose.~

you have no need, i shall go to your land.
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Trouble
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Date Posted: 19:27:23 02/16/03 Sun

.:.He was rather puzzeled, for he didn't really try to do anything. He wasn't going to try anything. But, he liked this spirited mare. A smile slipped on his face and he dared nuzzel her.:.
[> [> [> [> [> [> [> [> [> [> [> Subject: ącandy is sweet, but revenge is sweeterą


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Sweet Revenge
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Date Posted: 20:01:39 02/16/03 Sun

~the mare allows the nuzzle though her body flinches at the touch. she nods at the other stallions and turns to Trouble.~

shall we leave?

.: any eye for an eye :.
.: a tooth for a tooth :.
.: this is Revenge :.
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Trouble
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Date Posted: 06:34:36 02/17/03 Mon

.:.Of course.:.He turned on his haunches and started walking back to where his herd lands lay. Turning his head back, he nickered for Sweet Revenge to follow.:.
[> [> [> [> [> [> [> [> [> [> [> [> [> Subject: ącandy is sweet, but revenge is sweeterą


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Sweet Revenge
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Date Posted: 09:16:17 02/17/03 Mon

~the black mare follows silently and swiftly, not even turning her emerald orbs one last glance at the other stallions.~

.: an eye for an eye :.
.: a tooth for a tooth :.
.: that is Revenge :.


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