Date Posted:00:57:26 04/29/01 Sun Author: spw Subject: Re: Galactic ( from Unmanifest Poems) In reply to:
Fleurie
's message, "Galactic ( from Unmanifest Poems)" on 16:49:42 04/27/01 Fri
Fleurie .. how delightful to read you again!!!
This is very, very good!!! I do puzzle about
the 'fourteen globes' and wonder if you have a
website with your ' Unmanifest Poems '?;-p
Just one tiny question of "Galactic" in the one
line where you used 'layed', for the sake of where
it might [?] matter, I wonder if the correct usage
is ' laid'? This of course, hardly takes away from
the vision of your poem for which I can only say amen!!!
