Date Posted:11:34:06 03/23/03 Sun Author: Becca G. Subject: Re: Becoming Shakespeare: Write Your Own Sonnet (LESSON 4) In reply to:
Rachelle Chuirazzi (I messed up on the first one)
's message, "Re: Becoming Shakespeare: Write Your Own Sonnet (LESSON 4)" on 11:00:29 03/23/03 Sun
>I don't think I have the right idea but here goes
>nothing...
>
>Everyday that I may see you
>My heart begins to dance
>I know my love for you is true
>by having just one glance.
>You represent one's perfect world
>Because you are so kind
>You can make a dull day swirl
>which could please about anyone's mind.
>You can make my day brighter
>with just your precious smile.
>If you ever needed any of my assistance
>I would surely walk a mile
>Nothing is too great a distance
>for the one who would never make me vile.
Rachelle~
This is really good! I really like it! Good job!
~Becca
