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Date Posted: 12:50:39 03/23/03 Sun
Author: Mrs. G.
Subject: Re: Becoming Shakespeare: Write Your Own Sonnet (LESSON 4)
In reply to: Elizabeth Peptenar 's message, "Re: Becoming Shakespeare: Write Your Own Sonnet (LESSON 4)" on 15:04:52 03/21/03 Fri

Well, this is a tad violent at the end, isn't it? Does the beloved get plowed by a truck in your dream? How awful, but it fits the title! I can see you really put some time into the meter, and you seem to have the 5 stresses in each line. Only a few words are awkward in terms of pronounciation that way: if you look at your "closer," it would have to be pronounced cloSER to fit in your meter when normally we would say it CLOser. That's the toughest part, so I can really appreicate struggling with that! Otherwise, interesting idea.

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  • Re: Becoming Shakespeare: Write Your Own Sonnet (LESSON 4) -- Micki Chifor ( Comment ), 15:46:41 03/23/03 Sun
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