Date Posted:12:56:57 03/23/03 Sun Author: Mrs. G. Subject: Re: Becoming Shakespeare: Write Your Own Sonnet (LESSON 4) In reply to:
Kathryn Williams
's message, "Re: Becoming Shakespeare: Write Your Own Sonnet (LESSON 4)" on 08:32:26 03/22/03 Sat
Random! Your iambic pentameter suffers a little at the hands of your subject matter, but the rhymes work, and Shakespeare would have winked at the use of n' at the end of your first line of the couplet--sometimes you have to fudge a little. ;-) Some lines have too many syllables--read it aloud and march to it.
