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Date Posted: 13:19:47 03/23/03 Sun
Author: Mrs. G.
Subject: Re: Becoming Shakespeare: Write Your Own Sonnet (LESSON 4)
In reply to: Tim Ratliff 's message, "Re: Becoming Shakespeare: Write Your Own Sonnet (LESSON 4)" on 21:59:09 03/22/03 Sat

Awwww . . . just in time for spring, too. I like the line about the beloved being the hole in your heart rather than causing it. Now let's talk iambic pentameter. I want you to fill in the lines a bit so you get 5 stressed syllables per line--yours fall short. March around the room shouting your sonnet out until you have it! ;-)

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  • Re: Becoming Shakespeare: Write Your Own Sonnet (LESSON 4) -- Tim Ratliff, 15:10:48 03/23/03 Sun
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