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Date Posted: 17:35:11 03/24/03 Mon
Author: Brittany Lavine
Subject: NEW SONNET
In reply to: Brittany Lavine 's message, "Re: Becoming Shakespeare: Write Your Own Sonnet (LESSON 4)" on 18:08:18 03/23/03 Sun

I didn't really have much to change, just a few like spelling errors here and there...I think I already had the iambic pentameter right for the most part and if not then I'm very confused! haha...well here's my "edited version."

My love for you is comparable to
The mighty river flowing strong and deep
It never stops, nor does it start anew
No need, for it is always there to keep
This love for you can also be compared
To a thick, strong, indestructable wall
There is no reason to have it repaired
Because it will stand and make it through all
My love for you is comparable to
A gorgeous painting, it's beauty unmatched
This beauty is incredible and true
And with it the locks of hearts are unlatched
Though these things are perfectly wonderful
None so perfect as love is beautiful

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  • ANOTHER NEW ONE! -- Brittany Lavine, 17:41:24 03/24/03 Mon
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