Re: I am unique because I have a different subject title -- Shakespeare's Sonnets

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Date Posted: 18:21:36 03/25/03 Tue
Author: Zach Dubel
Subject: Re: I am unique because I have a different subject title
In reply to: Jacob Tyler 's message, "I am unique because I have a different subject title" on 20:08:10 03/23/03 Sun

>>After reviewing the characteristics of a sonnet,
>>compose an original Elizabethan (Shakespearean) sonnet
>>of 14 lines. Your theme may be traditional (i.e.,
>>love, nature, etc.) or contemporary, but you must use
>>the correct rhyme scheme (ababcdcdefefgg) and iambic
>>pentameter. When you are finished, post your sonnet
>>as a reply to this message. Get creative and have
>fun!
>
>Life can get really tough at times
>at it's worst when poverty is about
>things cloud it up like war and crimes
>i want to speak up against them and shout
>it is things like this i cannot do
>my family and social life keeps me in chains
>all of them are the ones who keep me blue
>i do not mind it so much, the rain
>these things do not make the world good
>sometimes it makes everything confused
>nothing at all is at its best like it should
>if only there is a way to make it subdued
>this cannot ever happen because i know
>life is nothing but a mere circus show

Its a good sonnet. i like the metaphors in, like in the last line. it fits together really well. good job.

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