Re: Becoming Shakespeare: Write Your Own Sonnet (LESSON 4) -- Shakespeare's Sonnets

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Date Posted: 12:26:24 03/20/03 Thu
Author: Alli Salsbury
Subject: Re: Becoming Shakespeare: Write Your Own Sonnet (LESSON 4)
In reply to: Gina Dacquisto 's message, "Re: Becoming Shakespeare: Write Your Own Sonnet (LESSON 4)" on 17:25:38 03/19/03 Wed

It wasn't corny at all, it is just that i think your iambic pentameter is a little bit off but overall very good. i think a lot of people can relate and so that is what makes it good!

>I see something inside of you
>fhat many others� cannot see
>You look at me, so sad and blue
>and I want to help set you free
>You look in the mirror and see nothing great
>but I look at you and see something beyond ordinary
>Inside of you, you have a very special trait
>if you just put aside everything depressing, u can see
>you�re extraordinary
>I wish other people could see what I see in you
>But how can they when you don�t even see how great you
>really are?
>Why won�t you believe me when I say your special too
>I just wish you could change for once and put a smile
>on your face
>Can�t you see I care for you?
>But I guess you don�t, so as for now you�ll just be
>wondering around without a place
>
>
>~*~*~Well there it is!! After writing about five
>different ones, I finally came up with one I am happy
>with!! Hope you don't think it's TOO corny!!~*~*~*~

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Re: Becoming Shakespeare: Write Your Own Sonnet (LESSON 4) -- Mrs. G., 12:39:55 03/23/03 Sun