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Date Posted: 05:44:36 12/12/02 Thu
Author: 詩狂人
Subject: Re: 打個招呼
In reply to: 十月 's message, "Re: 打個招呼" on 21:38:35 12/11/02 Wed

見到回應!你們果然是一班上進的年青人。
不如我說我對上那首詩的看法:
秋去冬來寒露漸
榮枯歲月去如風
風吹葉落人消瘦
昨日花飛在夢中

這首詩題是冬,但讀來無味。尤其「秋去冬來、風吹葉落﹞根本是湊字,談不上是什麼佳句,佳句要千錘百鍊的。 
又如作者又改什麼雲漸薄,即見為文造情(這些都是後生人的弊病)
,論詩須以真情為上。
根本四句不知所言,根本硬湊(得罪得罪)
有功夫的人,很少作七絕,絕詩講求煉意,尤其五絕不能隨意輕作。
現在的後生人,輕言作詩,作出來的往往都是絕詩,不談好不好,但說體制,為什麼不作七律呢?因為七律難作,因為你們根本係程度未夠,古人讀書十歲前,五經都琅琅上口,現在的年青人,不讀書,就來談寫詩,什麼是詩教?什麼是杜甫?什麼都唔知?以為什麼詞長?唉...

你們是香港的未來英才,應該好好讀書,寫詩要真情,寫詩要精練,
詩是言志的,不是附庸風雅的,算啦,不作批評。

多多包涵!!!

詩狂人,又作狂語...多多得罪!!!

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