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Date Posted: 06:02:24 12/15/02 Sun
Author: 社長
Subject: Re:
In reply to: 文津 's message, "對!我看錯了張先六十一字的那闕,"哀籠鳥"就改成"哀困鳥"" on 23:29:20 12/14/02 Sat

缺了籠字,生活氣息便大減了。
詞譜的對仗都是大多是可對可不對的,我想與其保留對仗,
不如改為「籠鳥靜」似乎還比較接近原來詩意的水平

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