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Date Posted: 22:27:49 01/14/03 Tue
Author: 十月
Subject: 第三句未夠精煉,衣衫單薄用單衣就夠了,結句重字了。
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  • 月夜(修改二) --> 月夜尋貓 -- ~小魚, 08:49:01 01/16/03 Thu
  • 不好不好,尋貓為題,已料到結局,而且故意的尋,就少了自然流暢的韻味了 (NT) -- 社長, 10:59:29 01/16/03 Thu
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