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Date Posted: 02:19:04 01/18/03 Sat
Author: 棗梨雅
Subject: 這個題目不錯,我看的時間頗有共鳴
In reply to: 文津 's message, ""誓盟"和"難言"句不好, 修改" on 20:32:10 01/17/03 Fri

寫在巴士上熟睡,過了站也不知,這個題目不錯,我看的時間頗有共鳴

但詞寫得不好,意象用得不夠準確,內容無獨特的地方,十分平面

「邊有人返工o個陣係醒架!」by黃子華

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