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Date Posted: 17:48:57 01/25/03 Sat
Author: 倚聲填詞系統
Subject: 第四句是七個字的,而你只有六字(其他錯誤,內文)
In reply to: 風舞者(中五會考生) 's message, "急件:請社長即日對好平仄及修改!謝!(更正)" on 15:11:12 01/25/03 Sat

+-+|,|-++|,+--|。(韻)+|+--||,+|+--|。(韻)+|--,+-+|,+|--|。(韻)+-+|,|--|+|。(韻)&+|+|--,+-+|,+|--|。(韻)+|+--||,+|+--|。(韻)+|--,+-+|,+|--|。(韻)+--|,|--|-|。(韻)

第四句是七個字的,而你只有六字

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錯誤1(高): 此字必須是仄聲
錯誤2(晃): 此字必須是平聲
錯誤3( ): 此字必須是仄聲
錯誤4(念): 此字必須是仄聲
錯誤5(筆): 此字必須是平聲
錯誤6(戰): 此字必須是仄聲
錯誤7(戰): 此字必須押韻(第7部)
錯誤8(飛): 此字必須是仄聲
錯誤9(桌): 此字必須是平聲或仄聲
錯誤10(仍): 此字必須是平聲
錯誤11(開): 此字必須是仄聲

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