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Date Posted: 13:19:16 01/27/03 Mon
Author: 風舞者
Subject: 不仄已經更正,請予以評點
In reply to: 風舞者(中五會考生) 's message, "急件:請社長即日對好平仄及修改!謝!(更正)" on 15:11:12 01/25/03 Sat

<<念奴嬌>>

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注:小所用的詞譜是有第七部韻是有戰字的

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