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Date Posted: 00:05:43 01/31/03 Fri
Author: 倫文敘
Subject: 此詩另有來頭,可惜工者不夠工,巧者不夠巧,功力所限也
In reply to: 社長 's message, "大作宜注意格律。首二聯略為有趣,頸聯及以下無甚可觀。" on 15:04:36 01/29/03 Wed

明清以筆記小說代替韻文而成為當時之流行文學,詩漸成為遊戲文字,或迴文或藏字,隱喻暗諷者成為抒懷述志外的另類詩的功能。

此詩記吾於某地所見怪事,社長大人看不入眼的頸聯記二件,另以鶴頂格記另一件,正是:

人首蛇身,小事多怪,
妄想教徒,常被逼害,
巧言令色,拒登「廣告」,
老大廣告,不可不登。 (此句為原詩鶴頂格也,哈哈。)

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