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Date Posted: 14:18:32 October 17 2003, Friday
Author: Factitious
Subject: Re: Correction
In reply to: Albert 's message, "Correction" on 13:41:26 October 17 2003, Friday

>
>>Tempting my heart with your fire
>>I lead from the palm of your hand
>
>Upon further thought, I think it's more likely "I'll
>eat from the palm of your hand". It makes more sense,
>contextually, and still sounds like it's probably what
>he's saying.

That one seems pretty plausible. But it mixes future tense in rather unpleasantly. I'd thought the idea of that section of the song was to start with present, then transition into past along with a change of mood.

It's inarguably better than "leap", so it has been incorporated into the lyrics page.

Thanks for the revisions.

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