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Date Posted: 21:37:40 07/05/03 Sat
Author: imisstara
Subject: well haha it all worked for me! The only suggestion I can think of...
In reply to: Linda_Delurked 's message, "The final version is much easier to read" on 21:31:10 07/05/03 Sat

And this is really small, but maybe if you could add a few lines describing more of the actual buildings falling to show more how devastating this is. I think describing a shot of Buffy's house would be really striking, maybe Faith or someone could run by the street. Or maybe like a street that has been cracked in half or something. I thought you did a wonderful job with everything else, though. haha i'm really just trying to think of some kind of suggestion and that's all I could think of!

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[> [> [> Hmm...that's a good idea! -- Linda_Delurked, 21:44:52 07/05/03 Sat

I'm at a net cafe right now and heading home, but I'll try to amend that before the episode goes out tomorrow. Thanks!

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