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Date Posted: 19:12:49 04/06/03 Sun
Author: Linda_Delurked
Subject: Wow! Really nice episode! Great work Crumpet!
In reply to: Kashmanik - email it to me ASAP 's message, "CRUMPTET, I STILL DONT HAVE YOUR EPISODE. DUE TO BE POSTED TODAY." on 12:54:07 04/06/03 Sun

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[> Revised Episode....requested additions -- anyas_butt_monkey *crumpet, I need your approval*, 20:00:53 04/06/03 Sun

First addition...comes in the Spike/Buffy scene at the beginning

"...Buffy changes the subject by telling Spike that Giles has had them all in full-on research mode for the last few days, trying to find out everything they can about Raven.

Buffy: He's been real avoidy lately....
Spike: And you're surprised? You weren't exactly happy when you found out how Giles defeated Glory.
Buffy: I know, I know.... I overreacted. After all I've been through these past 2 years, if I was in his position....
Spike: You would've done the same?
Buffy: Pretty much. I just don't know how to tell him.
Spike: You'll find a way. Anyway...Raven?"

Second addition....comes at the end of the first Raven/Giles scene:

"...Raven: Yeah, well, don't get too sad about it. (Moving around close to Giles, threatening). Your luck's about to get a whole lot worse.

Raven is interrupted by a knock at the door. She turns to Giles.

Raven: Better stay quiet. I don't want them annoying us too much, I don't want more bodies around here....

They both hear a key turn in the door.

Raven: ....but I may not have a choice.
Girl: (off-screen) Hello? Professor?
Raven: He's in here!

Two people walk into the kitchen, a white man and an asian woman, both of student age.

Girl: What the...?

Before the girl can finish her sentence, Raven smashes her face into the wall, knocking her out. The guy gets scared, but doesn't have much time to run, as Raven pulls him towards her.

Raven: You're cute. Shame you won't be for much longer.

She punches him in the face, hard. He falls to the ground, unconscious. Giles just looks on, mildly surprised.

Giles: What was that about not wanting any more bodies?
Raven: Oh, Watcher-man, these guys won't be here when the cops start poking around. I've got a use for them, don't you worry..."

Third addition....the Buffy/Giles scene, when she's got into the apartment:

"...Giles: I was just on my way out.

Buffy looks at Giles for a minute, then hugs him.

Buffy: I'm sorry, Giles.
Giles: For what?
Buffy: Everything. The....thing. I just wanted you to know....
Giles: I do know, Buffy."

What do you guys think?

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[> [> Looks good to me, anyway. -- Kashmanik, 22:06:44 04/06/03 Sun

Could you insert these into the right place in the ep and email/post it here? So I can copy and paste. :-)

If Crumpet doesn't respond soon with approval/disapproval we'll have to go ahead and post anyway!

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[> [> [> I'll e-mail it to ya with episode 12 :) -- anyas_butt_monkey, 22:54:54 04/06/03 Sun

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