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Date Posted: 22:00:15 03/23/03 Sun
Author: anyas_butt_monkey
Subject: Part II...
In reply to: anyas_butt_monkey 's message, "Here it is....Episode 4!! Part I, anyway..." on 21:59:41 03/23/03 Sun

Shoot Interior Summers House (Kitchen)

The bottle breaks the glass and a fire starts on the counter. Buffy backs away
and starts fanning it.

Buffy: What the hell? Faith!

Faith runs in the kitchen followed by Dawn and Giles.

Dawn carriers a fire extinguisher. A voice rings from outside.

Raven: Ha! You call yourself slayers? Where is your instinct? A true slayer
would have seen that coming.

Faith: Who the hell are you?

Raven: Aww, so much you don�t know...but I know all about you. My name is
Raven, but you�ll come to know me as the slayer who took out the Scooby gang.
But it doesn�t matter, because when I�m killing you, you won�t care who I am.
All you�ll care about is how one of your kind could do such a thing to you.

Raven looks at Faith.

Raven: Of Course Faith, you should know all about doing horrible things to your
own kind, lets see, what�s the worst you did? Was it the arrow to the back of
Buffy�s old flame, or was it switching bodies and sleeping with Buffy�s newer
old flame?

Faith: O, your gonna so sorry you said that.

Raven: Or there was my personal favorite, tying Buffy up and thinking you were
torturing her, when really, it was Buffy and Angel torturing you all the way...

Buffy: Faith, don�t listen.

Raven: Yeah, Faith don�t listen, don�t worry, when I�m through with you all,
what Faith and dark haired stutter girl did will seem like strawberry�s and
cream.

Willow: Hey!

Faith: Bitch!

Faith flies over the flames through the window and outside next to Raven.

Faith: Now, was there something you wanted to say to me?

Raven: Yeah, there is.

Begin Fight Scene:
-Raven spin kicks toward Faith.
-Faith ducks and grabs Ravens foot. She flips Raven back.
-Raven does a complete back flip and forward flips into a flying kick into
Faith.
-Faith falls to the ground, rolls back up and throws a right punch.
-Raven blocks and throws a left knocking Faith back.

-BUFFY flips out of the window and onto the ground behind Raven.
-Buffy high kicks Raven into Faith who spin kicks her back.
-Raven falls. Stands and forward flips toward the street.
-Buffy and Faith run toward the street. They look, Raven is gone.

Buffy: What the hell was that?

Faith: She said she was a slayer.

Raven runs down the street, Xander and Anya walk passed Raven who bumps into
him.

Raven: Out of my way cutie

Xander: Huh?

Raven runs down the street and disappears behind a tree.

Anya: New Girl?

Xander: I don�t know who that �

Anya: She�s a demon.

Xander: What? How do you know?

Anya: I don�t, but if she said you were cute, she must be a demon.

Xander: funny.

Cameras shoot back to interior Summers house. (Living Room).

Buffy sits with Dawn while the rest of the gang sits around the room.

Buffy: She said she was a slayer.

Faith: She was strong enough to be.

Dawn: It makes sense.

Giles: How so Dawn?

Anya: Trying to act like a watcher again?

Giles: Bugger off.

Buffy: Enough! Why does it make sense Dawn?

Dawn: Well, you died and no new slayer came, I just assumed that since it was
your second time
dying, no slayer would come, but apparently there is one, and she�s evil.

Faith: She�s right; I mean I came after you died, well after that other girl
died, why didn�t someone come again?

Buffy: I don�t know, and maybe that is it, but she said that she wasn�t that
new.

Xander: Well, Buff, technically she wouldn�t be, I mean you died over two years
ago.

Anya: So naturally she would think that she is an older slayer, considering
their life span and all.

Willow jumps up from an awkward silence.

Willow: of course, slayer quest, if both you and Faith had this same dream the
other night, and both of you can see the same thing in this dream, I can work a
spell to send you both on a slayer like quest. You can ask the First slayer and
the spirit guide version of Tara about her.

Faith: Reds right, this might be the only way we can find out what she is.

Kennedy: or we can just all go kick her ass.

Buffy: Kennedy chill, I think we should try the spell.

Faith: I mean, she knew all of us, all about us, what I did, and what Buffy did,
how can she know so much?

Camera shoots to interior old house in cemetery. Raven is inside talking to
vamps.

Vamp 2: How did you know about them, we watched you from behind the bushes like
you asked, how did you know?

Raven: I know many things about Sunnydale, the people in it and the slayers.

Vamp 3: How?

Vamp 4: You were summoned weren�t you?

Raven: How in the hell do you know so much about me?

Vamp 4: I know all about you, I read up, studied the mythology, I was studying
to be a professor of demonology before I was sired. I know about your
strengths, weakness�, and the prophecy of your death.

Raven looks up to see a rope holding broken metal candelabra on the ceiling.
The rope is strapped to a support on the wall. She looks at the Vamp and
smiles.

Raven: Really Now�

Vamp 4: Oh yeah, your not like other vamps, your stronger, not as easily killed
like other vamps, and I know that you were summoned, otherwise you would have
known nothing of this place. And I know the big ending for you is �

Raven takes out a dagger and quickly slices the rope, the candelabra swings down
and cuts the Vamps head off. He turns to dust.

Vamp 3: What did you do that for?

Raven: He knew too much, I hate that�

****Commercial Break, Hey McDonalds, I want a salad with lots of stuff�just
plain lettuce is never enough�..*****

Cameras shoot to exterior cemetery Spike is walking out of a crypt.

Spike places a hand written �sold� sign on the door. He laughs to himself.

Spike: Well, I fancy it better than the old one, not as big, but a great view.

Spike notices a shadow behind him.

Spike: I doubt you�re out lost in the cemetery love, so why don�t you just tell
me what you want.

Spike turns around to reveal Raven standing behind him.

Raven: So you are Spike.

Spike: Clever guess kitten, unless you�re looking for directions, I�m not
looking for a roommate so why don�t you just move along?

Raven: Aren�t you the least little bit curious to ask who I may be?

Spike: My guess, nothing good.

Raven: Good guess. Have you ever considered going on a game show?

Spike: I�ve always fancied the Price is Right, but I uh - wait a minute, what do
you want?

Raven: Just as you said nothing good.

Raven right punches Spike knocking him back into his crypt door.

Spike stands.

Spike: Christ woman, what is your problem, never seen that type of strength in
anyone but a slayer.

Raven: You�re two for two, care to stand up to the big wheel?

Spike: Great just what this town needs, another crazy slayer.

Spike Vamps and charges toward Raven

Raven flips him over her back and spin kicks him into a headstone, it breaks as
Spike falls.

Spike: Bloody Hell!

Raven: Hey Spike, stick around, all sorts of prizes to be given away in the end.

Raven walks away as Spike staggers to his feet.

Spike: Well, another girl that can kick my ass, bloody wonderful.

Camera shoots back to interior Summers house (Basement).

Willow, Faith, and Buffy are sitting in the basement. Dawn is sitting on the
stairs.

Buffy: Dawny, go upstairs.

Dawn: I want to watch.

Buffy: We need as few people here as possible so that we can do this without
twenty distractions.

Dawn: But Buffy.

Buffy: Dawn, no one else is down here, just go. You should be doing your
homework anyway.

Dawn: Fine.

Dawn exits and slams her foot down on every step until she reaches the door. A
slam of the door is heard.

Faith: That li�l sis of yours, she�s a lot like you B.

Buffy: I don�t think so.

Faith: Yeah, well, lets get on this spell, not to ruin the moment but there is a
celebrity reality show on tonight I don�t want to miss.

Buffy: don�t tell me its that WB show.

Faith: Well yeah�

Buffy: ew, ever since that really cool show went to a different network two or
three years ago, I haven�t watched since.

Willow: Yeah, but its spin-off is still on Wednesday nights at nine.

Faith: we�re still wasting time.

Willow: Fine, okay sit like I told you and place your hands together.

Buffy and Faith sit on the floor, the two sit Indian style directly across from
each other, their knees are touching.

Buffy and faith both raise their hands and their palms touch.

Willow: close your eyes. Good. Here we go.

Willow stand behind the two, she looks down at Buffy and Faith, when she raises
her head, her eyes are black.

Willow: Isis mother of Gods, hear my cry, and from my mouth this spell shall
pry. I am taking to you mine magic plight, take them by thine guiding light.
Summon that primeval force, and spirit guide them on their course. Take down
the barrier and let them seek. I will withstand, for I�m not weak. Into their
dreams can both be heard, let the two seek the third.

A light flashes over Willow, her hair turns completely black. A black cloud
circles around willow, light engulfs the two slayers heads. The light connects
between the two until there is a steady stream of light going between the two
slayers heads.

Buffy: Willow�did it work?

Faith: Red?

Buffy: Willow? Did it work!?

Faith: Buffy, open your eyes.

Buffy opens her eyes and sees nothing but desert. Faith and Buffy stand.

Faith: Its so familiar.

Buffy: Too Familiar, come on.

Faith and Buffy walk around the desert, they see a large rock. They walk
towards it.

Faith: So I still don�t get it, how did the slayer know about us?

A large RAT passes by the two.

Buffy: Well that�s random�

Faith: As far as our dreams go, its not that random�

Buffy: But a rat?

Faith: Could be clue?

Buffy: A rat?

Faith: Whatever, red got us here; least we can do is take note of everything.

The two walk around the rock and see the First slayer circling a cloaked figure.
Tara stands before the figure. This time, the words of advice are not the same.

Tara: They think they know, what they are, what�s to come, they�ve just begun.

Buffy and Faith look at each other.

Buffy: What is it Tara?

Tara: Oh, I�m not really Tara, I was just chosen, to speak for her.

Faith: Let her speak on her own.

Buffy: She can�t �

Tara: She cannot, she will not this is but a vision, a quest.

Tara looks around her; she looks to Buffy and winks.

Tara: Not to give the big ending away, but lighter days have passed you.

Buffy: What?

Tara: Things will be looking grave, as they were when you were against your
will.

Faith: Great, startin in on the cryptic.

Tara: She�s not the good, she�s not the evil, she just is. Her purpose is not
defined, not by man, not by beast.

Buffy: whose isn�t?

The robed figure stands. Ravens voice is heard.

Raven: Mine. I am not of man, not of beast. When they ride, I won�t be sorry,
not in the least.

Faith: Okay, can we stop with the damn rhyming.

Raven: But its so much fun isn�t it?

Buffy: What are you?

Raven: I�m one of you, a slayer, the chosen one.

Faith: After Buffy died?

Raven: Stupid Girl, I�m before that, before much, after much more.

Buffy: you were before me? How?

Raven: I don�t tell, I show.

Raven opens her cloak, she is in full vamp face, the sun beating down causes her
to engulf in flames. She disappears into dust.

Faith: She�s dead?

Tara: No, this is but a vision, a quest. The truth be told, she is not of the
living, not of the dead.

Buffy: Tara what are you talking about?

Faith: This is starting to get freaky, where did the black slayer go?

They look the First slayer is gone.

Tara: Take caution to my warning, the rat is smart, your will was smarter.

Buffy: my will?

Tara: the ride is coming, one if by land, two if by sea, but beware the slayer
makes three.

The ground begins to shake as the sand swallows �The spirit guide as Tara�. The
First slayer appears behind Buffy and Faith. She speaks in a demonic voice.

The First Slayer: They will ride, into hell!

The sky turns black as lighting flies around the slayers.
Camera flashes back to summers basement.

The flashes of light around the two slayers grow extremely bright. The light
flies from the slayers head straight into the clouds about Willow.

Buffy and Faith fly to opposite sides of the basement. Willows hair turns red
again and her eyes normal. She falls to the ground.

The two slayers and Willow come to their feet; the rest of the gang runs down
the stairs.

Xander: What the hell happened, are you okay?

Anya: Great, they blew their heads off

Willow: We�re okay.

Giles: Faith, Buffy, what did you see?

Buffy: So much, yet so little.

Faith: That slayer, she�s

Buffy: A vampire.

Dawn: A vampire slayer, yeah and?

Faith: No, she is a slayer that is a vampire.

Anya: Oh, well that�s not good.

Anya looks to Xander.

Anya: I told you she was a demon.

******Commercial Break: This week on Enterprise that damn Vulcan keeps causing
Problems, just kick her off the damn ship!!! I mean uh-, whatever, on Enterprise
UPN Wednesday********

Camera shoot to Interior Summers house (Dinning Room) The gang sits around the
table talking.

Willow: The sand swallowed her? Is she okay?!?

Faith: Red, it wasn�t the real Tara, it was just a manifestation.

Buffy: She didn�t even talk like Tara.

Giles: She mentioned something about one of by land two if by sea correct?

Faith: Yeah, so what about it?

Giles: Well that is from the story of the midnight ride of Paul Revere�

Dawn: Right! I read about this in school, he rode a horse a midnight.

Buffy: Raven said that �when they ride, I wont be sorry in the least�

Anya: So something�s riding? All I know about riding is when Xander and I were
still having sex, I would -

Giles: Oh please God no.

Anya: Never mind.

Xander: What else did she say?

Faith: Well, there was a rat�

Dawn: A rat?

Buffy: Faith asked about the slayer knowing about us, a rat walked by.

Giles: A rat?

Willow: It was symbol

Dawn: For what?

Willow: I don�t know, you asked and they gave you an answer.

Buffy: All she said was that things are looking grave as they were when we were
against our will. I don�t get it.

Faith: me neither. All I know is, this vamped Slayer, she�s bad news, and her
being here, its more than a coincidence.

Giles: Its fate, there was a prophecy, a lost one, it was only a rumor when I
was employed by the council. It talked a great deal about the �Vampired Slayer�
we all thought it was a typo or a mistake, but now I see, they meant �sired�.

Buffy: How do we fight her Giles, can she die like a regular vamp?

Giles: I don�t know.

Faith: There is only one way to find out, and I�m going, Buffy you coming?

Xander: Buffy you don�t know what this vamp is capable of.

Buffy: I�m going.

Willow: But guys, she�s strong, I mean she kicked both of your asses and then
left.

Faith: I�m still going.

Buffy: Me too.

The door swings open as Buffy and Faith go to exit. Its Andrew.

Andrew: Grandma and I had a fight, I need a place to stay.

Buffy and Faith look back to Xander. He gives a distraught face and then forces
a smile.

Xander: Welcome home buddy.

Andrew: Cool, back in the bachelor pad�

The slayers leave the house.

Camera shoot to cemetery Raven enters an old crypt.

Raven easily opens a tomb. Inside is a scroll. She picks it up.

She unrolls the top part of it. Nothing can be seen from the cameras view.

A crash is heard outside.

Raven: well, I�ll read this later.

She rolls the scroll back up and exits the cemetery.

Camera shoot back to outside of cemetery, Faith and Buffy are fighting Ravens
vamps.

Raven: Well, doesn�t take you two long does it?

Faith: we�re slayers girlfriend.

Buffy: The chosen three I guess.

Raven: Too bad.

Buffy: Raven, we can help each other, oh what the hell, lets fight.

Raven: As you wish.

Begin Fight Scene::

-Raven kicks Buffy into Crypt
-Faith spin kicks Raven, she falls and flips back up.
-Buffy charges from behind from out of the crypt.
-Raven jumps before Buffy reaches her.
-Raven lands on top of the crypt.

Buffy: What the hell?

Faith: How did she do that?

Raven: simple, I�m stronger than you.

Buffy and Faith look at each other. They look back up Raven is gone, she is
standing behind them.

Raven: And smarter.

-Raven jumps and kicks both Buffy and Faith into the crypt.
-The stumble to their feet and run to the door.
-They look Raven is gone.
End Fight Scene:

Buffy: Where did she go?

Faith: She disappeared, again.

The two walk throughout the cemetery.

Camera shoot to another part of cemetery, elapsed time, Buffy and Faith are
walking together.

Faith: hey B,

Buffy: Yeah?

Faith: When you said you�ve been in my dreams, there was this one I kept having
in my dream, the one where you were chasing me while I was in my coma.

Buffy: and then you stabbed me?

Faith: yeah, how did you know?

Buffy: I was there Faith, I felt it, I woke up and my stomach hurt so bad, that
it hurt to stand.

Faith: I don�t understand why we are connected.

Buffy: Everything is connected Faith, it�s just how it is. I don�t think she�s
here, let�s go back to the house.

Faith: Yeah, at least you didn�t have a dream about a cheese man.

Buffy stops dead in her tracks as Faith walks by.

Buffy: Yeah�good thing�

Camera shoot to Summers house, Interior Living room. The gang sits.

Buffy: I�m tired, I�m going to bed.

Buffy walks passed the book shelf.

Faith: If only we had a sign of what is coming.

The bible falls off the book shelf. It is turned to �Revelations�. Buffy picks
it up and puts it back on the shelf.

Buffy: Xander check this shelf out tomorrow, I think it�s tilted.

Xander: Ok Buff.

Buffy walks upstairs and we hear the door slam.

Camera shoot back to Interior of Old house. Raven enters with scroll in hand.

A robed figure meets her in a room.

Raven: I take it you�re the one that summoned me.

Voice: That I am, did you get it?

Raven: That I did.

Camera pan up robed figure to reveal a face. ITS AMY!!

Amy: Good.

Grrrrr�.Arrrghh�..

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