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Date Posted: 12:04:50 03/25/03 Tue
Author: Linda_Delurked
Subject: Nice episode Faithsguy!
In reply to: anyas_butt_monkey 's message, "Here it is....Episode 4!! Part I, anyway..." on 21:59:41 03/23/03 Sun

I know this is to be reworked now due to changes being made, but I just wanted to say I like it!

Two minor quibbles - I think the title "Chosen Three" gives the game away too early. If you have another title it means that finding out about Raven is more of a surprise.

Secondly, I don't think anyone should know about what Raven is until she tells them. Having a vamp know about the legend when neither the council nor Giles ever mentioned it (especially when Faith went all bad), isn't a good idea. But Pleeeeeeeeeeease keep the part where she tells them her name and says "pretty isn't it?" because that whole dialogue was just fantastic!

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[> [> A lot of stuff has to be re-written anyway, at least -- Faithsguy, 12:12:09 03/25/03 Tue

yours doesnt change the story, Linda I will try to work it in!!!

luv ya!

-Faithsguy

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