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Date Posted: Thu, Apr 22 2004, 21:05:09
Author: AC
Subject: Beyond GAFF HP Mpreg: Subjugation

Rapture! The mpreg archive has been updated for the first time since Christmas! And they've been busy little badficcers over there so there are oodles and goodles of badfics to be read and dissected. I'll be in hog heaven for days just trying to assimilate all the badness.

But I found one gem already that screamed out to me to be shared with the people here at GAFF. It's a Harry Potter story called Subjugation and it's at <a rel=nofollow target=_blank href="http://www.blooddance.com/mpreg/harpot/subjugation1-7.html">http://www.blooddance.com/mpreg/harpot/subjugation1-7.html</a>

Where to start...this story has everything. Bad plot, character assassination and mpreg. It just oozes badness. Let's start at the beginning.

We open at a trial. Who is on trial? Dumbledore. His crime? Raping Snape. Yes, this is one of those bizarro world stories where the heroes are the villains and the villains are the heroes. And Snape is a helpless innocent victim. We start out by finding that Snape was raped constantly:

While still fairly innocent in school, he had been thirteen when they had trapped him in the Prefect's bathroom. He had been gang raped by Sirius Black, James Potter and Peter Petigrew. This had been the first. He had tried to tell about that one, but no one had ever let him finish. He had been dismissed, and told never to repeat those lies again or he would be expelled.

It was made painfully obvious to Severus Snape that he was unimportant. That the so called honor of the school and that of the `Golden Gryffindors' held precedence over his petty concerns. And so when Malfoy had cornered him, told him to strip and get on his hands and knees, he had done so without hesitation.
By shear force of will he had managed to find a way to cope. He refused to be destroyed by them. Sometimes in the night, he woke up screaming and shaking, but no one ever saw this, no one knew. He was a Slytherin, and a true Slytherin would never show weakness, would not allow his enemies to see his pain.

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Yes, Snape is a helpless and innocent victim yet again. Let me digress for a seconbd and ask why these people insist on making Snape a rape victim constantly? And why can't they just stop at one? Why do they always make him the victim of multiple gang rapes? Do they think that being a rape victim makes him more noble or something and more rapes = more nobility? This Snape is passive, helpless and weak. He's totally unlike the real Snape. Anyone who raped the real Snape would probably need to have a food and water taster for the rest of his natural life, which would be much, much shorter than average.

But I'll continue. We find out that Snape is a hermaphrodite and he's pregnant by Dumbledore. Can I just say WTF? Luckily he wasn't born a hermaphrodite, he was turned into one by Voldemort as punishment for being a traitor. Let me just take a second to again say WTF? Let's see...I'm an evil dark wizard and I've just found out my loyal minion is actually a traitor. Whatever shall I do? Shall I torture him? Shall I imprison him? No, I'll just give him female genitalia! It's a stroke of genius! Not. What an incredibly stupid idea. I mean, what's the point? If you have a traitor in your midst you generally go for the slow death thing, not humiliation. This sounds more like a wizarding college frat prank than actual punishment by a dark wizard. It's an embarrassment to dark wizard everywhere.

Moving along, Snape is raped by Dumbledore, who calls him "a hottie". Seriously. Can anyone, anywhere in the world, imagine Dumbledore calling Snape a hottie? Let me amend that statement - can anyone imagine it without getting the giggles? I sure can't. But we find out that Snape was raped by Dumbledore, and Dumbledore got him pregnant. Curse that dark lord for his frat boy sense of humor! Even worse, no one believes Snape was raped because he's such a horrible person, and Dumbledore is found innocent. Even better, he tells the court that he wants to take Snape as his "bond mate", whatever the hell that is, and become his guardian, which is kind of eewww. He wants to become Snape's spouse and parent at once. Just ew.

So they get back to Hogwarts, where Dumbledore reveals that he's not only a rapist, he's also a kinky spouse abuser. He beats Snape and forces him to have sex again. We also find out that Snape has large breasts, a detail I could have lived without knowing, thank you. C-cups, in fact. We also find out that Dumbledore is a well-endowed and well-muscled stud, another mental image I could seriously live without. The next morning Snape and Dumbledore have a heart to heart and we learn how sweet and innocent Snape is and how evil Dumbledore is:

For a moment the two men just stood, until finally Severus took a deep breath. "Why did you do this to me Albus?" He did not care if he was slapped down the next second. He had to try to understand.
"Do what my love?" His smile was all affection.
"Fuck me, knock me up, marry me?"
The blue eyes watched him thoughtfully, then he nodded. "I will tell you why Severus. You do deserve that much." The old man sat on the bed, Severus remained standing since there was no other place in the room to sit and he would not get that close to Dumbledore unless ordered to.
"I have done this to you because it is my due." That earned the older wizard a blank stare. "Consider Severus, for over one hundred years I have been forced to push aside my own needs and desires for the good of our world. Most of those years were spent alone, celibate with only my right hand for company. I have fought and bled for the cause of Light. I have earned this through years of denial and sacrifice, years of celibacy and deprivation. Yes, my sexy little snake, I earned you."
"You are saying that I am your reward for services rendered to the Wizarding World? Most people would be satisfied with a gold watch."
"Not after one hundred years." Dumbledore reached out and groped him.
"What about my needs, my desires, my life?" Severus growled as he jerked himself out of Dumbledore's reach. Part of him screamed at himself to shut the fuck up and not provoke the man, but perhaps it was the unfamiliar hormones that coursed through his body, perhaps it was just anger and confusion demanding a voice, but Severus held his head high, he would not back down.
"Your needs, your desires, your life?" The old man chuckled as if Severus had just told an amusing joke. "My pet, all of those were forfeit the moment you bared your arm and sweet little arse to Voldemort." The Headmaster informed him with an odd smile. "Oh yes, I took quite a number of pensives from you over the years while you were sleeping. I know all about your initiation into the Death Eaters. I saw what the two of you did behind closed doors."
Severus gapped at him. "You stole my memories?" Gods, that was as much a rape as what had been done to him the day this all started!
"Stole is an ugly word my child. I needed to be sure that you were really turning from Voldemort. What you did was too important to leave your true allegiance to chance."
"If you saw what he did then you know why I came to you in the first place." The pale man said glaring at Dumbledore. "He was psychotic! He wanted me to kill. To create poisons to help exterminate every muggle on the planet."
"And, what he made you do on your back was not an issue?"
"Why should it have been? He was hardly the first." The black haired wizard was shaking.
"True. I remember watching you take it in both ends at once."
The old man chuckled. "I cannot wait till after the baby is born, and I do not have to be so gentle with you. Then we can really play."
"Play? You call what was done to me playing?" Suddenly he looked at the old man with cold fury. "Both ends? He never shared me till he made me a hermaphrodite."
"My foray into your memories went back a bit further. I saw a lot of things. Even watched you lose your virginity. Of course, I knew about that before hand, but it was interesting to actually be able to be there."
"You knew? But you refused to listen, said that it was a lie?"
"Of course I did. But there is little that goes on in this school that I do not know about."
Severus felt light-headed, dizzy. "You knew that I told the truth about Black, Potter and Pettigrew and you did nothing!"
"Come now Severus, be practical. Black and Potter were from two of the oldest, most influential in our world. Your family was poor, unimportant. You could hardly expect me to expel a pair of popular Gryffindors because of a little high spirits." Said the Headmaster with a shrug.
"High spirits? They put me in a full body bind, dragged me into the prefect's bathroom and, and…"
"Shh, Severus please, it is not good for you to become overly emotional in your condition." Dumbledore said soothingly.
"You knew! I was thirteen years old and you let them do that to me!" He stumbled back and slumped against the wall. "You are the Headmaster, you are supposed to protect the students in your charge! All of them!"
"Well, yes, but this was a special case."
"A special case. They gang raped me and you protected them!"
"Severus, you are a Slytherin, you understand expediency. Sometimes we must make sacrifices for the greater good." The old man seemed to think he was being perfectly reasonable.
"But why must I always be the sacrifice!" Severus slowly slid down the wall to sit on the floor with is legs drawn up to his chest.
"You knew all of it. Every disgusting thing they did to me whenever they caught me alone. You knew that the other Slytherins were abusing me too." It was not a question.
The old man shrugged. "You submitted to the Slytherins of your own free will."
"What else was I supposed to do? I could not tell anyone, they would have killed me. Besides, you and the other Professors had already made it clear that I was worthless." Tears were running down his pale cheeks. He looked at the other man with haunted eyes. "Did you just not think about it to save your Pureblood sensibilities, or did you watch them fuck me and jerk off?"
"Now Severus, it was not all that bad. Water under the bridge." The old man stood and walked over to him. "Besides, I certainly could not expel Malfoy or any of the others from prominent families."
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"My sexy little snake"? Gag me. But there are important plot points, like that Dumbledore is extremely kinky. I feel the need to bleach my brain for even thinking those words, much less typing them. He says things like (direct quote here): `My sweet Little one, I will show you pleasures you have never known. I will teach you the sweet pleasures of pain. The joy of submission.' and later he thinks: His thoughts strayed to the sturdy willow branch he had secreted in his sleeve. With all of this happening surely Severus would make some mistake that Dumbledore could use as an excuse to punish him. Oh yes, the thought of that porcelain pale skin bared, the crack of the thin springy wood leaving bright red welts on creamy thighs. Those lovely black eyes wet with tears, looking at him with fear from beneath sweat matted hair…


Ugh. Ick ick ick ick ick! Make it go away!

Even worse, Snape is seriously feminized. Dumbledore makes him wear a gown that shows off his cleavage and wear his hair in feminine styles. He's thought of and described with traditionally female adjectives and behaves like a stereotypical woman (at least if you're a misogynist who believes that women are fragile, helpless creatures good for nothing but birthing babies) - crying and worrying about his precious baby.

I couldn't read more than the first third of this story as it made me nauseous and I didn't want to have nightmares. I still have this urge to bleach my brain and eyeballs, and I'm afraid it'll become uncontrollable if I try to finish this story. But maybe with a stronger constitution than I will be able to take one for the team.

AC

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