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Date Posted: Sat, Apr 24 2004, 4:57:58
Author: Gloria
Subject: Robin lost Memories, a really GodAwful Witch Hunter Robin fic

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After the fall of the Factory Robin loses her memory. Let's take a look at that heart-wrenching scene:

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It was then that Amon spotted something lying in the debris, which Amon walked toward it. What he found was Robin as she was bleeding very badly so he carefully as possible picked up Robin.

�Robin wake up come on� Amon reply as he gently shake her with concern in his eyes

Amon took Robin to apart of the STN-J that was not burn when it had been burning. Amon places her in Michael bedroom as he got up to get some bandage. While she was sleeping he bandage her up and put her to bed with some of Michael clothing on.

�I better go and see if anyone else is here� Amon spoke to himself as he got up, which he left *An hour later*

Amon had come back which he sat down next to Robin, it was then that Robin started to wake up Amon notice so he called her name.

�Robin, Robin come on� Amon reply gently

Robin woke up as she looked at Amon then at the room, which she turned quickly back to Amon. �AAAAHHHH who are you� the girl yelled as her own hand slapped Amon across the cheek leaving a bright red mark
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Here that screaming? That is the sound of every English teacher who has ever tried to teach this author the proper use of punctuation, grammar, etc. Those other odd noises you hear is the sound of the canon tossing it's cookies. The place (Michael's room, apparently) that Amon took Robin to would be in Raven's Flat, NOT the Factory. And Raven's Flat did not get blown sky-high.

Later in the story we find that Robin's flames have changed color, instead of their normal orange/yellow color they are first red, then purple. Oh, and she starts slapping anyone who touches her, for some reason. And then another personality named Rae takes over Robin's body, and everyone seems fine with that. Oh, and all the Hunters hop into bed together in a non-GreyArchives-type way.

There's four chapters of this shit.

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