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Subject: Continued...

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Moonlight Mist
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Date Posted: 13:51:29 07/13/02 Sat
In reply to: Moonlight Mist 's message, "**Snorts**" on 12:41:59 07/13/02 Sat

The young unicorn fill trots around. Bordom (sp?) shines in her eyes. She trots over to a nearby river. She walks carefully into it and lets the water run over her legs. The rocks beneath her hooves sways side to side unsteadly. Carefully she ventures deeper into the water. The river, deep, so deep it reached up to the young fillys neck. She splashes around happily. Suddenly a huge wave races down the river. It nocks the filly off balance. The rocks under her hooves begin sliding. In horror she whines, loud and clear. She whines again before she slips of the rocks and is dragged down the river. She screams, a high pitched scream before she is dragged underwater. Using all her strenghth her head bursts above the surface. She screams again, hoping someone would here her. She then suddenly remembers her power. She had never used it before and didn't know how. She sighs in fstration.(sp?) The river pulls her farther and farther away from the vally. Watching ahead of her she sees rapids. She squeels as loud as she can before plumiting down the rapids. The trys to swims to the edge but the water to strong. She smashes into a large rock. She is blinded with pain for a few seconds. The rapids carry her to a small waterfall. She whines helplessly as she is pushed over the edge. Everthing goes black for her as she hits the water at the bottem of the waterfall. The water pushes her to sore and she lays there, unconious.(sp?)

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*He heard the filly cries so her run to the river and sees her in panic.*>>>>>>>> Thunder Storm 15:49:20 07/13/02 Sat

Re: *He heard the filly cries so her run to the river and sees her in panic.*>>>>>>>> -- Dark Sting, 20:33:19 07/13/02 Sat

*Looks at her* Your welcome.Do you need any help. *gets up.* (NT) -- Thunder Storm, 10:20:44 07/14/02 Sun

+Wakes+ -- Moonlight Mist, 12:06:02 07/14/02 Sun

Re: +Wakes+ -- Black Angel, 20:10:17 07/14/02 Sun

Sorry Wrong Name^ (NT) -- Dark Sting, 20:11:14 07/14/02 Sun

You were swim into the river and got to deep into the water.............. -- Thunder Storm, 18:16:29 07/16/02 Tue

Re: You were swim into the river and got to deep into the water.............. -- Dark Sting, 20:48:14 07/16/02 Tue

I am Thunder Storm. (NT) -- Thunder Storm, 08:20:23 07/17/02 Wed

I am Dark Sting -- Dark Sting, 12:32:23 07/17/02 Wed

((Sorry for the inactivneses. Compy crashed)) -- Mist, 16:24:01 07/19/02 Fri

Re: ((Sorry for the inactivneses. Compy crashed)) -- Dark Sting, 20:10:30 07/19/02 Fri

*Looks at the filly and mother* Hold On.*runs over to a tree and gets a huge leaf that would cover the wound*>>> -- Thunder Storm, 14:31:22 07/20/02 Sat

+Fear+ -- Mist, 18:41:53 07/20/02 Sat

Re: +Fear+ -- Dark Sting, 21:06:05 07/20/02 Sat

+Forced Smile= -- Mist, 10:49:52 07/21/02 Sun

Re: +Forced Smile= -- Dark Sting, 21:20:39 07/21/02 Sun

*he flies back and lands* Here Mist drink this.*hands her the potion.* (NT) -- Thunder Storm, 13:24:05 07/26/02 Fri