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Subject: Re: poetry good or dumb


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Erica H
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Date Posted: 22:29:10 06/13/04 Sun
In reply to: Bobby 's message, "Re: poetry good or dumb" on 19:59:35 02/12/04 Thu

I was wandering if my poem was ok or just dumb

Hi Bobby,

I haven't checked out the site in a long time, and I found your poem. I don't think it's dumb. I think it has good rythm. I'm, personally, drawn to poetry that rhymes and/or keeps a repiticious beat. Yours does. I often find that leaving the piece alone for a couple days, then coming back with a clearer head helps. A poem is always critique-able. Good Luck!

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Re: poetry good or dumbAshley mac baby13:21:51 11/06/04 Sat


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