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Date Posted: 01:03:35 03/15/01 Thu
Author: Beki
Subject: Re: Suffocate
In reply to: Singing Sparrow 's message, "Suffocate" on 20:01:32 03/13/01 Tue

I am glad you no longer feel this way. There are some great lines here, like "I’m being shed at by the sawmill of sadness" and "I am a jaded genie, cursed and never can be set free" (should be never TO be set free...I hav enoticed several small grammatical errors liek that in your work, would you be offended if I offer corrections for them?)

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