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Subject: no title yet-part4


Author:
Bela
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Date Posted: 18:09:21 08/26/03 Tue

I haven't found any name for the story,so do you have one in mind?HELP!!!!!!!!! I need one name i can't think at one.

It’s so quiet; I can almost say a peaceful quietness. Nikita tries to say something, but she can’t put two words together. Madeline tries to keep her calm and there is no trace of emotion on her face. Birkoff is a little anxious; the first who has the guts to break the silence is Walter, we can even see a tear on his cheek:” Madeline! ” .You… We… Didn’t expect you’re the lost agent, and … Birkoff … this isn’t happening. It’s a dream, a vision, you can’t be alive, you killed yourself, and Seymour died trying to save Section, no, DEFINATLY this isn’t REAL. It’s the best reverie I had of ages, and he smiles. Now all I have to do is to wait to wake up. “Walter, you’re not dreaming, says Madeline smiling. I’m real and so is Birkoff . I’ll explain you better after I’ll give my report to Operation, and so will Birkoff anticipating Walter’s desire. Can we see him now?” Nikita feels like a beech wondering why and realize in the same instant the motive: because she feels guilty.
“You don’t know?” – asks Walter deeply touched. “ Know what? ” – and Madeline has a strange feeling, something she hadn’t felt for years, fear for what she’s going to found out. “ Is there anything I should know before reporting? “ - But she doesn’t get any response. At least not until an operative tells Nikita that the Section’s 3 exchanged operative is waiting here in the Perth. Madeline turns white .She finally understands, or thinks she does, she still can’t believe it; Nikita is the new Section’s leader, but what happened to Paul????? A question she can’t figure out any plausible answer.

An office we haven’t seen before: something like a radio transmission room.
Nikita thought she had learned not to be caught off guard, apparently she was wrong. The entire story seemed to have terrified her. The plot was too hard to comprehend (understand) for her. She still wasn’t aware of some people’s power to do what ever they want to achieve they’re goals, especially when the purpose isn’t relatively noble. Or she wasn’t capable to figure out how a person could go through so much trouble to kidnap a person just because he’s desperately in love: fake the death of an operative because he was the only person that could help him have “the owner of his hart “, “ the love of his life”, and then make her a “clone” (not in the real sense of the word, someone who had a surgery to look just like her-like Madeline-, and then whit Birkoff’s help to act approximately like her for a small number of days before her imminent death) . Suddenly, like she just woke up she looks Birkoff strait to his eyes: “Thank you --for you’re justifications. You can go now. I’m sure Walter is anxious to see you “ and she smiles. After he leaves the room Madeline stares at her wondering what she’s going to reveal her. She had butterflies in her stomach, but trying not to show her impatience. She waits, and she waits, but Nikita doesn’t say a word., so she’ ill have to break the ice.
M: never though I’d see the day! You, the head of Section One.
N: it wasn’t something planned; it just happened.
M: I expected it. After all you were a spy for the Center
N (surprised) : How… how do you know that…how long have you know this?
M: from the start: I had you fallowed.
N (petrified and amazed): but Operation didn’t know…
M: I didn’t have a chance to tell him, and I wanted to handle it myself. Apparently I didn’t work like I’d expected.
N: All this is so inconceivable, and still it’s true. I can’t imagine someone go thru so much trouble –plastic surgeries, make us believe you’re dead and have you work for him- just to have you…
M (arching an eyebrow): You can’t suppose someone would do all this FOR ME? (I used the upper case to express, to underline his idea, not because Madeline would yell at Nikita, I had to say this because I had a lot of troubles before using the upper case –everyone thinks I was yelling, but I was only trying to give more substance to my opinion); Or the plan?
N (didn’t expected this, surprised and confused, intimidated): No, no; the plan…
M: Of all people you should have understood, after all Michael did for you, you still don’t know what is capable to do a man in love?
N: I’m sorry…
M: For what?
N: For everything (crying tone, like she was really sincere)
M (feeling her hart pounding faster and faster): Is there something I must know?
N (not very coherent): Operation is … he’s… he was participating at one rescue mission; he attempted to save Adam; the mission was … (Madeline giving her one of her looks) …he was shot… didn’t make it, died instantly (Madeline shocked) there was nothing we could have done. Madeline gets up and practically runs from the room, slamming the door. (I just remember they have automatics doors, or whatever that doors are called J)
N (alone in the room): I’m quite happy it happened this way. I didn’t want to feel responsible for your death

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[> Subject: Re: no title yet-part4


Author:
truth_addicted
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Date Posted: 18:39:01 08/26/03 Tue

i can't wait to read the big end!!! and for the name i don't have any idea,sorry.don't worry will find one

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[> Subject: Re: no title yet-part4


Author:
Jason
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Date Posted: 13:49:47 08/27/03 Wed

when is Ops going to show his face???!!! don't forgwt about the costum party this sunday at 21.00 ;)

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[> Subject: Re: no title yet-part4


Author:
Albert
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Date Posted: 15:16:50 08/30/03 Sat

i can't wait to read the rest

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