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Subject: no title yet-part6


Author:
Bela
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Date Posted: 17:22:50 09/02/03 Tue

don't forfet to send me a mail if you have any sugestions or coments

Madeline got dizzy, a thing that never happened to her since she was a baby trying to keep focused to the trees she left behind her, not wanting to be pulled back into her deepest thoughts, but whit out any results, she couldn’t help not thinking once again at Paul and at everything he meant to her. All the time she was apart from Section she blamed Paul for thinking she could possible killed herself- especially in face of Nikita and in front of a so-called head of Center, a child-woman and a 2 cents sleazy actor. Trying to remain lucid she realized she didn’t even knew in what class (sort, kind) of car she was in, all that she observed was that the car was black; everything happened according to the plan and so fast, the car showed up at time, the chauffer salute her and offered to take her bag – a small one, she would start a new life and she begun (begin) whit the small details- a holl new wardrobe; she would have plenty of time to go shopping and see the newest collections- opened her the door and start driving. The interior of the car was elegant: leather sits, a TV incorporated in the back of one of the front chairs, and a mini pc in the other, the newest audio boxes, conditioner air, all the comfort for a first class car. She remembered once again all the times Paul told her she loves her and she never replied because she was too scared to say that 3 words and she couldn’t helped wondered if she would do the same if she had the opportunity to start things all over again (If she would have done the same if she would have the chance to have him close to her at least one more time).

A couple is walking along a riverside, we can hear the sound of the water, the trees are green, all kind of flowers around them, the air is warm, but still the sky is blue-gray. They’re both laughing and suddenly start kissing, the man is touching the girls cheek whit his fingertips and kisses her closed eyes; in response she kisses his arm. The man grabs one of the girl’s curls to straight it up only to realize that in a few seconds it will take back her shape. They are still kissing when it stars raining…
The girl: let’s return at the cabaña.
The man: not just yet.
The girl: but will get wed
The man: so? When will you have the opportunity to dance throw the rain ever again if we’ll go back in Paris on 2 days?
They both smile and can hear the music in their heads: If I’m not in love whit you by Kathy Troccoli. They start dancing…
The man: Madeline… I love you
The girl: I already know that, Paul and rests her head on his chest while dancing…
They finally arrive; she gets out of the car and inspects the place. “It’s quite far of any other house; I can’t remember seeing one more than 3 hours, the highway was empty”- she thinks. She enters a gate full of green plants (covered of plants, all the fence was the same covered of green plants). In front of her it’s a small alley. On each side of the alley are little trees, rose bushes. In a far corner of the garden it’s a fountain, a bird is singing at her edge (border). As she walks forward (alone, the chauffer disappeared whit her suitcase after they entered, realizing there must be another entrance) she distinguish a big-2 levels- white house whit a red roof and a porch and whit big windows. There were 2 armchairs separated from a round wood table (on the porch). She took a final look at the garden, smiled when she saw a tree house in other corner of it, took a deep breath and knocked at the door, waiting for someone to open her, convinced herself she likes her new home.

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Bela
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Date Posted: 17:25:59 09/02/03 Tue

sorry,don't forget

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